Perhaps the Next
Window to the soul
They say the eyes are the window to the soul. Gazing deeply into Sylvia's eyes I see only a vast wasteland. Devoid of emotion, intellect. Forlorn in their absence of knowledge. Too bad. Our meeting earlier had shown such promise. I had truly hoped to learn more from our intimacy. Removing my blade from her heart, I wipe it on her chest. Ah well; perhaps the next one.
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Andrew C McDonald
Andrew McDonald was a 911 dispatcher for 30 yrs with a B.S. in Math (1985). He served as an Army officer 1985 to 1992, honorably exiting a captain.
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So dark and evil but so well done!