"Oh, Jeff... I love you too... but..."
She paused.
“I’m a vampire and I don’t want to be the one to drain you dry of every ounce of your blood. I’m the last vampire on earth and your blood smells far too sweet for me to be near you any longer. I’m leaving. I’ve got to get as far away from you as I possibly can. You’re just too good to die! Your blood is far too handsome.”
It sounded like she was at an airport about to board a plane.
She continued.
“I’ll always love you from afar! Bye, my darling.”
Her breathing could be heard on the line for a second and then she hung up.
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Rowan Finley
Father. Academic Advisor. Musician. Writer. My real name is Jesse Balogh.
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Comments (3)
This is absolutely hilarious and delightfully dramatic! "Your blood is far too handsome" might just be my favorite line ever. It's like a rom-com with fangs! 👏
hehe 🤭 What could be a better way to call it off but turning into a vampire... 😄 She cares for Jeff, right 🥺😆
hahaha, this is great, I loved it! Great idea, Jesse!!!