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Newhouse Manor

The Loft, A Barn and many Boarded Secrets

By K.H. ObergfollPublished 3 years ago Updated 3 years ago 9 min read
Newhouse Manor
Photo by Ricardo Gomez Angel on Unsplash

What story wouldn’t be complete without an heir, (a fan of some sort) and a much needed fortune? Naturally, of course there’s a cog, but—don’t let that fool you, this revived story will be good, I promise!

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Hay lined the dust-ridden floor as Tempest McCallum made her way up to the loft of the old Newhouse Barn—climbing through the rusted blades of a long-forgotten fan—careful not to be noticed by anyone else.

The structure, of course was the only uninhabited place left on the sprawling fifty acre estate, and it was the only place not boarded up tight.

A few hundred yards away, the Newhouse’s once towering home lie in degrading shambles, falling apart from the inside out.

Naturally—Tempest often found solace in the quiet dark reprieve of the cool loft. The breeze stirring up all the old, forgotten smells.

From time to time, if she really paid attention she could still get a whiff of the animals that had once called this place home. The horses, a few goats and some feathery chickens. It was even rumored a peacock had been the ruler of the roost.

Now this was her sanctuary.

For weeks she had been sneaking out to the barn nearing dusk and had even forged a small room up in the rafters complete with a makeshift bed right under the large half-circular window that overlooked miles of farmland.

She often wondered what had become of those who lived and died here. It was truly a magnificent place, the most beautiful she had ever seen, and it was starting to feel like home.

There were many nights she would lie awake watching for signs of life in the nearby windows as she slowly drifted off to sleep. She’d become quite accustomed to the groans and creaks emanating from the old barn and she knew there wasn’t a soul around for miles. She wasn’t worried about someone finding her, and as it were, many of the townsfolk steered clear of the Newhouse Farm so she didn’t reckon she would run into anyone, but maybe that was her problem…

The farm and its sprawling acres were deemed haunted—of course, having such a sordid and mysterious past didn’t help—or at least, that is what the stories would have you believe but young Tempest McCallum was not one to run from adventure or a little scary story. In fact, that is what drew her here to begin with, she was intrigued…curious even. She had to get to the bottom of what really happened here— to know once-and-for-all if the rumors and legends were true.

As the stories all go, Old man Morton—as everyone called him had quite the reputation. He was a mystery in himself. No wife or kids, no family, no nothing. One day he vanished leaving behind his farm and the animals and nothing was ever seen of him again. She was surprised no mysterious long-lost heir had ever come out of the woodwork trying to lay claim.

Naturally, it was always assumed the old man had just simply died or relocated but Tempest found those stories to be too convenient.

No one just disappears without reason.

She allowed herself to slowly slip into a deep sleep, thinking of where to start next in her search when she was awakened by a flicker of light up in the middle room of the second floor. The moon perhaps?

She immediately jumped up allowing her eyes time to adjust—did she just see what she thought she had? Was someone in the home? Whatever it was wasn’t visible anymore. Tempest slowly slipped out of bed and made her way down the shaky ladder as she tip-toed across the yard.

The moon illuminated most of the path, feeling more like a blanketing beacon than a welcoming sign but she soon realized she wasn’t alone—even the moon couldn’t help her. She knew whoever was up there had probably seen her as she made a quick bee-line for the front door.

Tempest stopped. Hesitation slowed her as she begrudgingly put one foot on the step, staring intently at the faded sea-green colored door with its slices of faded paint. Smudges of dried raindrops collected at the edge of the rusted kick-plate in long forgotten waves while panels of lead-lined glass hung precariously in the side windows.

It had been over a decade since anyone had knowingly been inside and she wondered how someone could have gotten in—she had spent most of the afternoon scouring the house for a way in. It couldn’t have been easy, but surely she would have heard something…

Tempest hadn't even thought of trying the front door. She pulled a small metal hooked- tool out of her bag after weighing all her options—at this point if someone was in there, they would have surely seen her and they’d be waiting. She couldn’t very well go back to sleep now.

Adrenaline kicked through her veins as she pulled with all her might, ripping the boards off of the door one by one. She gently turned the knob. To her surprise the door was unlocked. A crashing screech filled the dead-space from where the hinges had rusted shut.

Tempest recoiled, the moons glow brightly bathed the wooden floors.

It was even more of a surprise at how pristine the home looked. It was as if it had recently been lived in—all the furniture was neat, tidy and in place—a stark contrast to the outside. The only thing missing was food on the table and a roaring fire in the fireplace.

It such a disparaging sight. Uncanny.

Tempest expected to walk into a floorless room with the roof caved in all the way through to the basement. She had hoped for an empty house full of cobwebs and overgrown fauna but what she got was even more confusing.

Tempest slowly walked over to the stairs as she made her ascent—careful to not make much noise as she lightly stepped onto the carpeted boards beneath her feet. The home was dark but somehow felt like the lights were on as she reached the top and stopped just short of the landing gripping the hooked tool tightly in her sweaty hand. She was ready for whatever fate lie in front of her as she peered down the hall to each of the closed doors.

Tempest took a deep breath as she summed up what was left of her nerves, walking towards the middle of the hall as she thought about which door she should try first.

She instinctively reached for the last door on the left and flung it open. Nothing. To her dismay—an empty room—no closet, no furniture, nothing; just two windows and a door. What a strange room—she thought to herself as she quickly shut the door.

She was growing impatient. It was now or never…what else did she have to lose? Tempest went over, pushed the middle door open and was stunned to find a room full of vintage toys. What an odd thing to have in the house of a man who had no family.

She walked past the scattered, abandoned toys— towards the window where a lone snow-globe sat bathing under the moons light. As she held it in her hand, a magnetic feeling came over her and a bright light flashed in front of her face. She felt a zap of electricity course through her body as she dropped the snow-globe at her feet.

The last thing she saw was the shimmery ball of snow rolling off the carpet and under the bookshelf as she was hurled into pitch blackness.

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Before long, Tempest awoke to find herself on a soft bed of moss. She was in some sort of forest. As she looked about she didn’t recognize anything. She could smell the familiar scent of wood burning and got up to follow the smell.

Nearby about a half-mile through the woods was a small hut-like cabin. Thin plumes of white smoke curled through the tree tops. Tempest ran towards the cabin looking for any sign of whoever was home. Tempest needed to find some food. She was sure it was nearing morning but didn’t know for sure how long she had been out.

As she peered through the neatly arraigned cabin she saw the same immaculate and tidy appearance that had surprised her back at Newhouse farms. Everything was in place. It was then she saw a man in a red flannel shirt bumbling about the far side of what appeared to be a kitchen. She could hear him humming to himself, an array of brightly colored vegetables chopped to esteemed precision on a cutting board—by themselves.

As the old man spun gracefully between the counter and the fireplace she watched as he tossed the contents of a skillet pan, the smell of simmering meat and potatoes wafted past her.

He walked over to the table a few feet from her face, she lowered herself from sight, the vegetables pouring themselves neatly onto two plates.

She scrambled towards a nearby wood pile just as he came out the front door. Before she knew it she was face to face with the man.

He was much older looking out in the sunlight but she recognized his handsome features—“Old man Morton!?”

“I knew you weren’t dead,” Tempest exhaled, watching wearily as the man wiped his hands on his apron.

“Not in the slightest. In fact, I have been waiting for you to come my dear. I made us breakfast” he began as he motioned for her to follow.

Tempest followed, confused. Her apprehension was clear but she didn’t have many options, the food smelled so good. He nodded at an empty seat, she didn’t object, instead quickly scarfing the food down.

Old man Morton slowly ate as he watched her devour the contents of her second helping.

“It took you long enough to find me” he exclaimed as Tempest looked at him, a puzzled expression on her face—“I had faith you would. I know you have been staying at my farm. I saw you a few times and left some odds and ends for you to keep you warm”.

Tempest knew he was referring to the stack of blankets that had been left on a shelf in the barn. That was awful kind of him.

She slowed her momentum.

There were so many questions and she didn’t know where to begin. “You’re house is not haunted” Tempest stated—her tone was matter-of-fact.

“No, no it’s not” Old man Morton answered quietly. “It’s just empty and unloved. I don’t want it to be forgotten…When I found out you were sleeping in my barn I decided something had to be done. I knew you would see the light from the snow-globe in the window and find me. It was only a matter of time…”

Tempest nodded her head as he continued—“the house itself is magical if you weren’t aware. It has many secrets but I can’t keep taking care of it. I only come back once every few weeks to inspect it, I come and go through the snow-globe—a neat trick huh?”

Tempest nodded once more, curious.

She was starting to put the pieces together—“then why did you leave the farmland and come here” she asked.

“There was nothing left for me. My animals had all been sold off, I have no family, no other heirs, I don’t have much of anything but the farm and my cabin... but I want you to take care of it for me…”

Tempest was unsure of what to say—she was a young woman herself, she didn’t know how to manage a farm.

“It is easy. It practically manages itself. Here…let me get something…”

Old man Morton walked over to a curio cabinet in the middle of the room and pulled out a stack of letters—“Not much of a fortune but its all yours. This explains everything.”

Her hands shook as she tore open the envelopes and began to read what was not only a will but as she soon found out—she was—and had been the rightful heir and owner of the Newhouse Property for over twenty years.

He had gifted her everything. His estate, the home, the money—all of it—was hers.

She sat confused—why had she not known before. Her parents hadn’t said anything before their deaths.

“But the paperwork…I don’t understand”. Tempest began.

The man said nothing as Tempest stared at the date on all the documents—everything was dated the year he disappeared, the year Tempest was born.

This couldn’t be a coincidence.

Tempest looked up. Old man Morton was gone. Tempest jumped up and ran about the cabin…it was as though he had vanished in thin air. As she looked back over to where he was sitting just seconds before—a small key and a snow-globe sat in his empty chair.

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About the Creator

K.H. Obergfoll

Writing my escape, planning my future one story at a time. If you like what you read—leave a comment, an encouraging tip, or a heart. It is always appreciated!!

& above all—thank you for your time

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  • Antoinette L Brey3 years ago

    I loved this. i actually felt anticipation as she walked around the house

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