My little Brother
Inhibit to follow through...
From the window
I watched
As he,
Round Rock the other side of the road.
He abodes the same facial expression...
Gaping stoutly forward.
The stormwater swooshed over the windshield of the Ford F150.
I grabbed my phone and endeavor
To try at another buzz...
No Signal
I knew that no time soon would Mark, rostrum from the Arcade Game.
My little brother was not a techie, but whenever mom gave the “ok “ for us to Runnalong to the Arcade we stayed for hours.
Mark was determined to beat a record 🏆
Finally, Mom called
Mark won some money.
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HandsomelouiiThePoet (Lonzo ward)
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Comments (39)
Very nice!
Great writing and vivid imagery x
Great expressions, You have a way with words.
Very good
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Congrats on your Top Story, Lonzo! I enjoyed this one!
Winning money through playing video games! I love it!
Good job! Mark got some praise for his amazing imagination. Continue your efforts.
Great story, Lonzo! Congrats on the Top!
Yayyyy congratulations on your Top Story!
Congratulations on Top Story!
Nicely done. Congrats on the TS
Well done! Awesome imagination and an added plus; Mark won some 💰 Keep it up! 👏 💙 😃 🎉
Well Done HL!
Awesome 🤩 congratulations on top story!
Awesome! And congrats. Lonzo! 💖
Love this, Lonzo!!! Congratulations on T S!!!💖💖💕
Well done
Congratulations on Top Story, Lonzo! Well-deserved!
Congratulation on your top story
Congratulations on this being a Top Story Lonzo. You so very much deserve it my friend!
It's a very dreamy story it feels like a childhood memory. Congrats on TS
Congratulations on your Top Story
Lonzo, you have a gift, a true gift!. Congratulations on your Top Story, and thank you for making me feel. 💞🌻
What an awesome story! You can feel the tension and anticipation all the way through, until the wonderful, rewarding payoff! Fantastic!