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My Last breath

Fading into eternity

By Blessing AkpanPublished 3 years ago 3 min read

Fading into Eternity

The room was quiet, enveloped in an atmosphere of somber stillness. Soft rays of sunlight filtered through the partially closed curtains, casting delicate patterns on the floor. I lay in a bed, weak and frail, with each breath becoming more labored than the last. The weight of the world seemed to rest upon my chest, a burden I could no longer bear.

My loved ones surrounded me, their faces etched with a mixture of sadness and acceptance. They had been my pillars of strength throughout my journey, offering unwavering support and love. Now, their presence was both a comfort and a reminder of what I was about to leave behind.

As I stared at the faces of my children, I saw the reflection of my own hopes and dreams. They were my legacy, the embodiment of everything I had fought for in this life. Memories flooded my mind, like fragments of a bittersweet melody, each note a cherished moment etched in time.

I remembered the laughter and joy we had shared, the tears we had shed in times of sorrow. I had watched them grow from wide-eyed children into remarkable individuals, capable of creating their own paths. I had witnessed their triumphs and failures, and through it all, I had been their unwavering source of love and guidance.

With my last breath drawing near, I found solace in knowing that they were equipped with the strength and resilience to navigate the world without me. They had imbibed the values I held dear, and I knew they would honor my memory by living lives filled with compassion and purpose.

As my gaze shifted to my spouse, I saw a lifetime of love reflected in their eyes. We had weathered storms together, supporting one another through thick and thin. We had built a home filled with warmth and affection, a sanctuary where love thrived. The thought of leaving them behind pierced my heart, but I took solace in the fact that our love would endure, transcending the boundaries of time and space.

My thoughts then drifted to the countless experiences that had shaped me, the moments of profound beauty that had left an indelible mark on my soul. The breathtaking sunsets that painted the sky in hues of gold and crimson, the gentle caress of a summer breeze, and the tender embrace of loved ones—I had been blessed with a tapestry of extraordinary moments.

As my breaths grew shallower, I felt a sense of peace wash over me, like a gentle tide lulling me towards the shores of eternity. The fear of the unknown receded, replaced by a deep-rooted faith in the inherent beauty of life's cyclical nature. I had lived, loved, and experienced the full spectrum of human emotions, and now it was time to surrender to the eternal embrace of the universe.

With my last breath, I whispered words of love and gratitude, hoping they would reverberate in the hearts of my loved ones long after I was gone. I closed my eyes, surrendering to the infinite abyss, knowing that my spirit would forever be entwined with the tapestry of existence.

And so, in that quiet room, amidst tears and tender farewells, I took my last breath. But my essence, my love, and the memories we had created together would endure, becoming a guiding light for those left behind. In the tapestry of life, my thread may have come to an end, but the story of my existence would continue to unfold, woven into the lives of those I cherished most.

Love

About the Creator

Blessing Akpan

writing is what I possess

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