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Midnight Carnival

When the lights go out, the horrors come alive

By LucianPublished 9 months ago 2 min read

It was supposed to be one last carefree night before adulthood. Olivia, Marcus, Jenna, and Theo had been inseparable since high school, and with college looming, they wanted one more memory to seal their bond. That’s how they ended up at Black Pines Amusement Park—an abandoned relic on the outskirts of town, its rusted rides and broken fences long since overtaken by vines and time.

Rumors swirled about the park’s closing. Some said a child had vanished on the carousel. Others whispered about accidents covered up, rides that never stopped, laughter that turned into screams. But those stories only added thrill to the group's plan. Urban legend or not, they wanted a taste of something different—something unforgettable.

They broke in just after midnight, flashlights slicing through the thick mist that clung to the ground like spilled milk. The air smelled of damp earth and old oil. Rides loomed in the shadows, their skeletal frames casting twisted silhouettes under the pale moonlight.

The first sign that something was wrong came at the Funhouse. Mirrors once cracked and dust-covered now gleamed with impossible clarity. When Theo stepped inside, he didn’t come out.

At first, they thought he was playing a prank. But the scream that followed shattered the joke. They rushed in, only to find themselves in an ever-shifting maze of reflections. Theo’s voice echoed around them—distorted, panicked—before vanishing altogether.

After nearly an hour of desperate searching, they stumbled out, Theo gone, the Funhouse now dark and silent behind them. The night had shifted. The park no longer felt abandoned. Lights flickered to life along the midway. Music began to play from unseen speakers—a warped calliope tune that sent shivers through their bones.

The group tried to leave, but the gate they entered through had disappeared. In its place was a towering clown animatronic, its head slowly turning toward them, eyes glowing red. When Marcus approached, the clown sprang to life, dragging him into the darkness with mechanical limbs that moved too fast to be man-made.

Only Olivia and Jenna remained, gripped by terror but determined to survive. They ran from attraction to attraction, each more nightmarish than the last: bumper cars that rammed without drivers, a Ferris wheel that spun endlessly with ghostly figures staring down at them, and a haunted house where whispers lured them deeper with familiar voices that weren't real.

Eventually, they made it to the carousel at the heart of the park, where they found Theo—pale, glassy-eyed, strapped to one of the horses as if part of the ride. The horse turned to look at them, and its jaw opened in a scream.

Jenna didn’t make it out. Olivia, bruised and bloody, stumbled into the morning light alone. The park behind her had vanished, swallowed by fog and forest, as if it had never been there.

The police found nothing but Olivia, mumbling about games that played you back and laughter that bled.

Black Pines remains an urban legend, and locals still hear music on certain nights—music that no one dares to follow.

Thank you for joining me on this dark ride. I hope it left your heart racing just enough to check behind you tonight.

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Lucian

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