Microfiction Challenge: 'The Window'
What happened to Jill?
By Sean PatrickPublished 3 years ago • 1 min read
Photo by Anna Dudkova on Unsplash
"I didn't leave the window open, I would never, not in this neighborhood." Jill's final text message haunts me. She was angry after coming home to find a window open. I texted back to assure her that I also had not left the window open. I would never leave a window open under these circumstances. Just as I pressed send on my text, I felt a cold chill up my spine. If I didn't leave the window open and she didn't leave the window open...?
About the Creator
Sean Patrick
Hello, my name is Sean Patrick He/Him, and I am a film critic and podcast host for the I Hate Critics Movie Review Podcast I am a voting member of the Critics Choice Association, the group behind the annual Critics Choice Awards.



Comments (5)
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Oohh, creepy mystery! I hate that spine tingly feeling - yikes! Well done!
I like how you ended the story with a question which gives an entire story in itself.
The mystery, intriguing story
Awesome! love the plethora of unanswered questions I now have swimming around my mind!