There was only one rule: don’t open the door.
At least, I think that’s what he said to me… but then she started crying and I couldn’t help myself!
That’s just maternal instinct, isn’t it? I mean, what kind of mum leaves her baby to wail behind a closed door?
So, I rushed in here and scooped her up without a second thought.
It’s only now, as I rock the still crying bundle in my arms, that the look in my husband’s eyes comes back to me.
Don’t open the door.
My skin is crawling.
Something isn’t right.
I look around the room for some sign of what it might be. An open window maybe? An item out of place?
But everything is exactly as I expect it to find it.
And still…
Don’t open the door.
The sound of heavy footfall. I’m afraid of what’s coming.
But the alternative is leaving my back exposed, so I whip around in terror as the sound drifts through the now open doorway.
I hold my crying daughter closer.
The footsteps grow louder… louder… louder… and stop.
Don’t open the door.
Maybe I should close it again?
I hold my breath and reach. Right before I slam it shut, I hear his voice.
“Where are you? I told you not to open the bloody door,” my husband screams in anger.
No…
Terror.
He’s screaming in terror.
I sigh with relief and step back through the doorway.
He’s not going to hurt me.
“I know. I’m sorry,” I say sheepishly. “But she started crying and I couldn’t leave her there. She needed me. Our baby needed me.”
I’m looking lovingly at the bundle now safe in my arms when my husband responds.
“Sweetheart, we don’t have a baby.”
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Comments (4)
Ooo wow what an ending. And using the opening line repeatedly felt like this heartbeat pulling you fowards. Nicely done!
That's a masterpiece! Fantastic written ✨💥👏
What a cool narrative, congratulations.
really unsettling.. good work.