Lights Over London
a short story
“Madam, you should come below.”
Elizabeth took a long drag on the cigarette tucked neatly in the ornate silver holder. She ashed it in the ivory tray sitting beside an untouched glass of brandy. “You know Dickie, I still remember the fireworks at old Victoria’s Diamond Jubilee. Sat right in this spot. I was sixteen, fresh from New York. Archie and his father lined the streets that day, and god knows what they did once the fireworks started,” She watched the horizon alight with activity while the tendrils of discarded cigarette ash swirled into the night through the open sitting room window. It was odd to see her London street all alive yet silently empty at the same time.
Dickie stood in the entryway, silent as the street below, offering no further urging. They both knew it was futile. They both knew it was his duty anyway. They made for a stubborn pair. Her mother in law had been the same way, Dickie remembered.
“I had a cousin on the Titanic. One of Archie’s cousins, obviously. I find it ironic. She gave everything to get to the place I gave everything to leave, only to die in a steel tube in the middle of the ocean. Then the war came, I hate to think about Archie… He didn’t need to go. He…” Her voice trailed off as the sky lit up somewhere over near Westminster.
She didn’t need to finish the sentence. Dickie knew if he went into Archie’s old study, the Admiralty cable would be right there on his desk beside his diary, a single stain at the beginning of the line presumed lost with all hands. Two months later, the guns across France silenced. Two short months. Elizabeth never let Dickie clean that study. She never went in there herself.
Elizabeth continued, “it’s funny in a way. Not that I bear any ill will toward New York, but I did everything I could to leave there. But she…Cousin Evelyn—yes, that was her name—she was so, so excited. I remember Archie telling me before we left for her party that I could not say a bad word about New York, not a single ill word,” She took a drag from the cigarette and watched another rush of fireworks over the horizon. ”I wonder if one bad word that night and she’d at least be here with me.”
She paused and looked out over the London skyline. ”I’m sorry, Dickie. I won’t go down there. I won’t go…”
”It’s alright, Madame. Just doing my job,” he turned to leave.
“And Dickie… Thank you. Thank you for everything. You’ve been a good friend to a lonely old woman.”
”As I said, just doing my job, Ma’am. Get some sleep.”
”I will,” Elizabeth said and finished her brandy. As she set the empty glass on the table, the rolling air raid klaxon reached its crescendo.
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The soot from the Underground covered his hands, not even the ash erasing the smell of tunnel grime. Down below, the bombs above seemed little more than rumours. His hands shook and he wiped them on his trousers in a vain attempt to steady them.
To the left stood Number Five, not a single chip in its brick. To the right, Number Seven stood a little worse for wear with its windows busted out, but still proud and defiant.
Pulling himself together, Dickie stooped down in front of the pile of rubble that was Number Six, and pulled out of all things a leather bound diary, somehow intact while the world around it burned. He almost laughed, the force of the blast had almost blown all the dust off Archie’s diary. Almost. He stood there in front of the pile all alone until the sun began to set, and the night’s sirens roared to life once more. Diary tucked against his heart, Dickie disappeared back into the tunnels once more.
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Matthew J. Fromm
Full-time nerd, history enthusiast, and proprietor of arcane knowledge.
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Comments (35)
Big Congrats on placing in the challenge! 👍🥳🎊🍾
Wooohooooo congratulations on your win! 🎉💖🎊🎉💖🎊
So happy to see this placed! Congratulations! Loved this story.
Yay Matthew!!! Circling back to say congrats on getting Runner-Up on The Summer That Wasn't Challenge!! 🎉
Beautifully atmospheric and quietly devastating. The details! From the silver cigarette holder to the dust on Archie’s diary made this feel tangible, lived-in, and haunting. Congratulations on your win!
Oh, this lingers! Very elegantly done :) That image of the diary being pulled from the wreckage is haunting and vivid!
Nice
So much emotion and detail packed into this wonderful piece of writing :) I enjoyed the read. Great stuff!!
Beautiful. I loved all the little details and sense of time of place. Very nice voice - congratulations sir! Have a brandy yourself! :)
Heartbreaking tale… well deserved Top Story & Leaderboard win.
Wooohooooo congratulations on your Leaderboard placement! 🎉💖🎊🎉💖🎊
Well done, back to say congratulations
Love the pacing, heartache and yearning of this!! Congrats on your TS and first place on the leaderboard place this week!! 🎉
Wonderful short story, packed with nostalgia and emotional undertones. Congratulations on your Top Story and Leaderboard recognition, too.
Loved the soot from the underground. Easy to forget it was once steam driven. Intriguing piece and you got the atmosphere
Man! That was a great piece of writing and reading for me. The pacing for such a brief piece was top notch!!! Super congrats on TS!!!
I knew this was going to be good, Matthew, when I saw it had a TS. Really good. Congrats on the TS.
Very well-written, congratulations on Top Story!
Alight wow, just incredible.
Love the contrast between before and after Matt, and the way your dialogue and word choice reflects conversation back then, particularly with class diffferences. "Down below, the bombs above seemed little more than rumours. "- this line stood out to me for some reason, and I like it. I like how much is left unsaid for the reader. Nicely done👏
Deeply moving and beautifully nostalgic. Your writing captures the quiet strength and lingering sadness of personal loss amid historic tragedy perfectly. Truly exceptional storytelling.
You brought to life two lives and their memories by painting a picture of realism. I felt their emotions. Matthew I must say this is truly a wonderful piece from you. Good luck, it is a winner in my book
Great work
So freaking good! All your historic pieces are so transportive, Matthew. You crafted Elizabeth's and Dickie's character so masterfully and you made it feel effortless. Congrats on a well-deserved Top Story! Dynamite entry for the Everything Looks Better From Far Away challenge!
Fastest Top Story in the west, again. Sir. I hope this plays a part in the winner's circle. Loved the minimalist approach to this. So much details, yet, so sparse. No word out of place, and a fine and little tense, self-contained story that had further reaching events outside of those included in the scene. Well done, is what I am trying to say.