Leave the Light On Part 1
Microfiction for the 500 word shockwave challenge
The past is never really gone. Michelle Liew
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The apartment would have put most tenants off-- flickering lights, a musty odour that clung to the air, and shadows that slithered across corridors.
But for single mother Lina Crew, content wasn't an option--only survival. With her bank account nearly empty and six-year-old Eric to support, a cheap rental like this was all she could afford. Besides, all she wanted--and needed--was a fresh start.
They settled in as best they could, clinging to the promise of some stability after a bruising custody battle. To the relief of the financially-stretched but dedicated mother, he began to make friends.
Perhaps too many. Some...were wrong.
Muffled whispers came from his room. Lina thought nothing of it and let them be; they were nothing but harmless playdates and sleepovers.She didn't want to be the sort of mother who appeared at her son's bedroom door in the middle of the night.
Then one night Eric murmured: "The girl in the closet doesn't like darkness."
The whispered voices grew louder, bolder. Darker. As if they were not just speaking, but waiting.
Eric's complaints grew like repeated recordings; soft scratching, like nails clawing desperately on wood, behind the walls. The closet opening and closing. Lina still dismissed them as child's play. The busy mother always threw herself onto the sofa after a long day, falling asleep in front of him.
Time passed, and young Eric became a mere shell of himself. Odd, rake-like scratches appeared on his arms. His arms, once plump and full of energy, now hung limp. Cold. He stopped talking.
The rakish marks finally caught Lina's divided attention. Muffled whispers came over the baby monitor one midnight, and she raced to Eric's room. The little boy was fast asleep.
But the closet door stood ajar. Open, a fraction of an inch-- she knew that she had closed it herself.
As if inviting her to explore.
And so she did. But that was all it was--a closet, albeit old, dank and dark.
The scratches on Eric's arms were becoming deeper, more blood seeping from them with each passing day. She pushed her way into her landlord's office.
"Ma'am, I don't think there's anything to fret over" He waved his arms and pushed her to the door. "Besides, the apartment's ancient....hey, you knew that when you rented it."
She found herself at the town library, fingers flicking through countless records in desperation.
A young girl, Sophie, had lived in the apartment decades ago--but had vanished. Her parents had appeared on television, hollow-eyed, grief wrapping them like a second skin.
Clipped behind the the torn pages of the news clipping was another photo- a yellow grainy picture of a man whose sunken eyes stared.
Straight at Lina.
Her throat caught. The man in the photograph was an older version of Eric. The same pale features, the same haunted demeanor.
Lina's pulse raced as she slammed the file shut. Was the past was talking to her son?
Then Eric's voice: "Mom, who's that?"
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This text is entirely original. The presence of AI tags is coincidental. The number of words between the quote and disclaimer is 500.
About the Creator
Michelle Liew Tsui-Lin
Hi, i am an English Language teacher cum freelance writer with a taste for pets, prose and poetry. When I'm not writing my heart out, I'm playing with my three dogs, Zorra, Cloudy and Snowball.
Comments (7)
Very good story Michelle! ❤️
Perhaps a lost ancestor? That was a nice little cliffhanger.
wow, the dread and suspense building in this is palpable. I can imagine how she would have felt, the way you described her situation, and the increasing concern for Eric. The reveal was quite a gut punch! Well done, Michelle!
The past hides many secrets, just like the closet. You keep the reader in suspense with this adventure of the closet, the ghost, and Eric. Was it the ghost of the poem taking a stroll? 🌞
Whoaaaa, it was an older Eric? How's that even possible? Can't wait for part 2!
Another great challenge entry , but very suspenseful, love it
Very good work 👏🏻