jagged, I cut open my wall and I saw the emptiness inside the mirror. The mirror that made up society. The dead rat that was full of saw dust and full of trash, I saw hatred and they all had it for each other, they just wore masks, some hide it better than others but I don’t I am free I am free I am—-
I cut open the wall and fed it the guts, I feed the wall the people so the monster doesn’t escape. The mirror looks jagged, I must be the only real person.
Jagged mirroring rats.
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I took a look at your artist first, then i read you piece. While I'm no closer to understanding it has taken my appreciation to a new level! Good Job!
I don't know. This one feels a little "jagged." Highly thought provoking.
Mirrors portray true images, you painted them, great job 😊
Oh wow. This is so descriptive, and creepy. Well done.
This was so crazy good!!! What a way to paint a picture!! Great work :)