It's Now 3:34
Do You Dare Answer The Door?
He will remember forever, it was exactly 3:34
When, out of nowhere, came a knock at the door
One that rumbled the house and rattled him to his core
Like it had done in the past, 25 years before
*
Deep scratches and clawing
Something wild, trying to get in
In his brain, a thought gnawing
"A debt collector of sins?"
*
There was smoke circling the doorway
The scent of cinder and ash
His skin now, clammy and gray
His life flew by in a flash
*
In the rhythm of a song
Though the words seemed to elude him
And the measure was all wrong
As his breath was escaping
*
Rat a tat, tat
Not unlike Morse code
He picked up the bat
He kept next to the door
*
His heart pounding harder
His steps, cautious, 'cross the floor
His skin, sweaty but colder
Perspiration dripped from his pores
*
As he neared the doorway
Another pound, made him jump
Deja Vu began to replay
And the room seemed to hum
*
His breathing grew heavy
Sweat dripped off of his brow
He called his dog, Lenny
But he hid behind the couch
*
He placed his hand on the doorknob
Still gripping the bat
When something made a vase drop
Turns out, it was the cat
*
He gathered his composure
Threw his slipper to chase it away
The end table flipped over
He hid behind the buffet
*
Still the pounding continued
In the sequence of three
He was in such a grim mood
That he started to plea
*
"Hello?" Who is out there?"
He managed to ask
Then, he mumbled a prayer
That no one would answer him back
*
All he could hear, were feet shuffling
And the wind through the trees
He cried, lightly sniffling
Getting down on his knees
*
Then, he peered through the keyhole
But saw nothing, but shadows
Just then, another hard blow
Knocking his bat to the floor
*
The noise startled the dog
Who began chasing the cat
Tipping over the firelogs
Spilling ash on the mat
*
He was falling to pieces
When a voice, small and quiet
Made him pause, he was speechless
Completely frozen with fright
*
The voice whispered to him
"Relax, and everything will be alright"
"If you remain calm"
"And admit I was right"
*
He sat quiet for a minute
And said, "what do you mean"
"I will not be complicit"
"With your motives, unseen"
*
The voice, beginning to anger
Sternly barked, "you know why I'm here"
"I told you not to slander"
"now you see, I was sincere"
*
"I never make threats"
"I stand by what I say"
"But you appear to forget"
"What I told you that day"
*
The man scoured through his memory
but it seemed, nothing would stick
He said, "You'll have to forgive me"
"I think I'm gonna be sick"
*
Then he thought he heard footsteps leaving
Like they had gone down the steps
That's when the pounds became screaming
"I'm not through with you yet!"
*
And then, the walls started to tremble
Shaking the dust from the beams
A figure transcendental
Like something from out of a dream
*
It appeared right before him
Floating there, in thin air
He new now, this was grim
And started pulling his hair
*
The fright was too much
And he fainted straight away
This spirit had a grudge
He knew he was going to pay
*
But, when he woke the next morning
Neatly tucked in his bed
Was this ghost sending a warning
Or was it all in his head?
About the Creator
Kelli Sheckler-Amsden
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Comments (5)
Well-wrought and masterfully rhymed!
Brilliant use of rhyme and repetition to create tension. The blend of the supernatural and psychological fear is masterfully handled.
A captivating read, and I loved the twist at the end - it was all in his head.
Hmm, it could had been a realistic nightmare. Love this fun spooky story.
This is all psychological and yes never answer any door at this time you mentioned for it will be probably The Grim Reaper. Great job.