Incision Decisions
Dark Microfiction Magic Challenge Entry!
Decisions, decisions, incision decisions. Where should I cut first? Taunted the masked man walking around the table.
Alan lay motionless. If he wasn't already paralysed by the injections, he was by the fear that coursed through him. And for what? The kindness he decided to show to a stranger in the dark.
Not being so trusting would be a hard lesson for him to learn. Not that he would get the chance to learn it. As he drifted off, he wondered what would happen to the other people trapped with him in the back of the van.
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Paul Stewart
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Comments (11)
Oooh these are all so dark. I love this side of you! 🖤
This was so dark and creative! Dark is my language, lol! This was fantastic!
Ugh, excellent work! But also, no thank you 😳
Super creepy, I loved it 🥰
Ahhhh creepy. An absolute nightmare. Well done 😬
Chilling. Involuntary organ donations, harvesting for the black market with a twisted sense of humor. Well done.
I let my imagination creep around in the omissions. This was very is dark indeed and very well done!
I guess this is beyond a simple vasectomy. Lol. Great read, Paul.
Yikes!!!! This was creepadelic! Loved it! Great work, Paul!
Ah, yes! Delightfully dark! Great job, Paul!
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