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Imposter in a gingerbread house

The struggle with feeling I am not good enough Imposter in a gingerbread house

By waseem khanPublished 2 months ago 4 min read

The first snowfall of winter had just begun when the small village of Frostwhistle prepared for its most loved celebration—the Grand Gingerbread House Contest. Every home glowed with colorful lights, and the warm scent of cinnamon drifted through the chilly air. Bakers, children, and even elders spent days crafting the sweetest, most magical gingerbread creations imaginable.

Among them, Ella Thornberry, a bright 13-year-old girl with flour always dusting her hair, had won the contest two years in a row. Her imagination was unmatched—gumdrop windows, chocolate fences, peppermint roofs—she built dreams out of sugar.

But this year, something strange was about to happen.

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A Mysterious Visitor

The night before the contest, Ella was in her kitchen carving tiny gingerbread tiles. Her sleeves were rolled up, her cheeks were rosy from the oven’s heat, and her counter was a delightful mess of candy and icing.

Suddenly—knock, knock—someone tapped lightly on the door.

Curious, Ella wiped her hands on her apron and opened it.

Standing on the doorstep was a tiny gingerbread man, barely as tall as her knee. He had shining raisin eyes, jellybean buttons, and a grin made of melted sugar.

“H-hello?” Ella whispered.

“Good evening!” the little figure said cheerfully. “My name is Pip, and I heard you’re the best gingerbread maker in Frostwhistle. I would love to help you build your masterpiece!”

Ella blinked. Gingerbread didn’t walk. Gingerbread didn’t talk. But the sparkle in Pip's eyes felt warm, and magic wasn’t unusual in Frostwhistle during winter.

“Well,” she finally said, smiling, “if you want to help, I’d love that.”

Pip puffed up proudly and marched inside.

To Ella’s surprise, Pip worked with astonishing skill. Wherever his candy feet touched the dough, the gingerbread shimmered slightly, almost as if it were alive. He piped icing with perfect swirls, arranged candies with mathematical precision, and hummed soft sugary tunes that somehow made the dough rise faster.

Ella was delighted.

Ella was amazed.

Ella was completely unaware… that Pip wasn’t what he claimed.

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The Sweet House with a Bitter Secret

By midnight, the gingerbread house stood tall on the kitchen table like a sugary castle. The chocolate bricks glowed warmly, the peppermints sparkled like jewels, and the candy-glass windows reflected golden candlelight.

“It’s beautiful,” Ella breathed.

“It is,” Pip said softly… almost too softly.

Ella didn’t notice the way he stared at the house—not with admiration, but hunger.

Because Pip wasn’t a magical helper.

Pip was an imposter.

A spirit of mischief. A candy thief. A creature known as a Sweetsnatcher, famous for stealing the grandest gingerbread creation of the year.

And Ella’s masterpiece was exactly what he wanted.

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The Night of the Contest

Next morning, the village gathered in the grand hall. Children gasped at the rows of gingerbread houses—tall towers, candy bridges, chocolate rivers. But Ella’s house was the star. People whispered:

“Magnificent!” “Like something out of a fairy tale!” “How did she do it?”

Ella smiled shyly, but Pip, hidden behind the tablecloth, grinned wickedly. When the judges stepped aside to discuss the winner, Pip slipped out with tiny silent steps.

He approached the house.

He stretched out his caramel fingers.

Just one touch, and he could drain all the sweetness inside the gingerbread, shrinking the house into a pocket-sized treat he could steal forever.

But as Pip touched the side wall, something unexpected happened.

The house glowed.

A pulse of warm golden light spread from the gingerbread roof to the candy foundation. Pip stumbled back, startled.

Ella turned around. “Pip? What are you doing?”

The gingerbread man froze. His jellybean buttons trembled.

Ella walked toward him. Her eyes widened as she saw the half-absorbed candy on his sticky fingers.

“You… you were trying to steal it?”

Pip’s grin faded. “I… I didn’t mean to—well, actually, I did. But it’s what Sweetsnatchers do…”

“You lied!” Ella whispered, hurt.

Pip hung his head. “I liked helping you. But the hunger—it's part of what I am.”

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A Different Recipe

The judges were returning. The crowd was getting louder. Ella had seconds to choose—expose Pip, or protect him.

She took a deep breath.

“Pip,” she whispered, “if the sweetness tempts you, then help me change it.”

“How?”

“We’ll make a recipe even a Sweetsnatcher can’t steal.”

She rushed to the table, grabbed a bowl, and Pip followed hesitantly. Together, they added spices, not sugar. Warmth, not candy. Ginger, nutmeg, and a touch of magic that Ella didn’t know she had.

Within minutes, they created a new layer—one that coated the house like a golden glaze.

Pip touched it—and gasped.

“It tastes like… kindness.”

Ella smiled. “Sweetness isn’t the only thing that makes a gingerbread house special.”

The judges returned exactly then.

After careful discussion, they announced:

“The winner is Ella Thornberry!”

The crowd cheered. Ella blushed. Pip stared in awe.

She could have told them about the imposter.

She could have exposed his trick.

But instead… she offered him a hand.

“Stay with me,” she said softly. “Help me bake—not steal.”

Pip’s raisin eyes glimmered. “Really?”

“Only if you promise to be honest.”

Pip nodded vigorously.

And so, an imposter became a friend.

Together, they created gingerbread not just sweet—but magical.

And Frostwhistle remembered that year forever—

the year a gingerbread house was saved not by sugar,

but by forgiveness.

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