Ichor Screenplay Teaser
my "CW" style,1hr teleplay that never did well in comps T_T
TEASER
FADE IN:
EXT. THULE - NIGHT
Heavy rain pummels a dark ocean. Lightning torches the sky and illuminates a tropical archipelago with a large central landmass. This island chain is Thule.
EXT. OCEAN - NIGHT
Amid this oceanic storm, a small buoy struggles to stay afloat. A flash of lightning reveals TWO SILHOUETTES, looming underwater beneath the tiny beacon.
INT. CELLAR - NIGHT
In a fallout shelter like room, a boy watches an ant crawl between his fingers. As the insect reaches his palm, he CLAPS and SQUEEZES his hand. This boy is LASZLO (10, hard eyes).
Lightbulbs blink as rainwater drips from above. Laszlo relaxes his grip; the ant emerges from his hand and GROOMS itself.
EXT. SHORELINE, THULE - NIGHT
TWO HUMANOIDS in DARK GREEN FUTURISTIC WETSUITS trudge out the ocean. They are MONA (37, radiant) and RHYS (35, regal), the Parents.
EXT. SHANTYTOWN - NIGHT
A mucky, fenced-in town that neighbors a landfill. A group of catadores play craps inside a candle-lit shack.
Beyond this favela, across a stretch of water and on another island, is a seaside town overflowing with activity and marvelous lights, untroubled by the ongoing storm.
EXT. SHANTYTOWN - NIGHT
The Parents hustle through a warren of puny huts. Mona pauses and looks through a window. Inside, Mona sees:
A family of children nestled together on a single mattress, under a mess of blankets. Each one, raggedy and scarred.
Among the castoff flash furniture, at a desk littered with junk, a girl counts coins and sorts through rummage. Her name is LAPH (12, sallow). She wears a BRIGHT BLUE BANGLE.
Rhys pats Mona and spurs her onward.
INT. HUT - NIGHT
The Parents enter an unoccupied hut flooded by rainwater. At the center of the room is a rusty car engine, a relic. Rhys effortlessly lifts and tosses the old thing aside...
Mona points her left palm at the floor; the logo on her suit, a SUMAC LEAF, glows green. In an Iron Man like fashion, light emits from her palm and reveals a hatch.
INT. CELLAR - NIGHT
As the hatch opens, rainwater splashes onto Laszlo, pressed against the corner and gripping a DECORATED "KASH" KNIFE.
MONA
Laszlo?
LASZLO
Mother?
RHYS
Hurry up!
MONA
Come on Laszlo, we're going home.
Mona lowers her hand.
EXT. DOCK, THULE - NIGHT
The family rushes towards the dock. The storm calms...
RHYS
Come on, Ewan, you promised me a boat!
MONA
Over there, Rhys!
INT. OCEAN - NIGHT
As a commuter boat drives to the dock, AN UNDERWATER SHADOW stalks it from behind. The shadow ACCELERATES.
EXT. BOAT - NIGHT
The HELMSMAN waves at the family. A familiar symbol is branded on the Helmsman's uniform: the SUMAC LEAF.
Behind the Helmsman... crawling on board are TWO ATLANTEANS in DARK BLUE FUTURISTIC WETSUITS.
The Helmsman turns around and YOWLS as he spots the deep-sea humanoids advance. The Helmsman reaches for his gun.
BANG! BANG!
The male Atlantean, LUFT (30s, mastodon) bulldozes through the bullets, tackles the helmsman off-board and takes him all the way down...
EXT. DOCK - NIGHT
Laszlo watches his father, Rhys, tremble as he recognizes the female Atlantean standing on the bow of the boat.
This Atlantean is CARLA (22, aquiline). Her bone-white face is decorated in ritualistic scars.
RHYS
Damn it!
Carla dives into the ocean. Her entry, her form is terrifyingly olympian.
Rhys grabs Mona and urges her to flee. Mona shrugs him off.
RHYS
Run!
MONA
No... No more running.
RHYS
You need to go, Mona. Laszlo and I will be fine. You must go!
MONA
This will not be my life, Rhys.
RHYS
I can fix this. I will come back for you.
Carla has arrived. She hops out the ocean and struts toward the family. Rhys locks eyes with Mona.
RHYS
(to Mona)
Please...run.
Rhys begrudgingly meets Carla halfway... Face-to-face, Carla exhales and bows before Rhys in a sardonic manner.
CARLA
It's been a while your highness.
RHYS
How did you find us?
CARLA
Your colorful friend told us to follow the boat.
RHYS
Ewan gave us up? Why would he do that?
CARLA
You committed an inadmissible crime. The council bids your return.
As Carla rises, she eyes down Mona. Carla chuckles and dances on Rhys's back with her fingers. She whispers in his ear:
CARLA
Perhaps I'll chain her to a rock and feed her to my darling raptors.
Carla sees Laszlo at Mona's side.
CARLA
So that's your bastard.
RHYS
Carla, we will not resist. Let us return to Atlantis and I will tend to any grievances the council may have. Laszlo, come!
LASZLO
I am not leaving mother.
Carla rubs Rhys's shoulder and brushes him aside.
CARLA
You defied The Instructions for this? You could have done better.
RHYS
Do not touch her--
Carla repels Rhys and knocks him to the ground. Luft approaches Rhys from behind and pats his back. He bearhugs Rhys and forces his vision away from Mona.
LUFT
Condolences, my prince. It would be best if you did not watch.
CARLA
The council knows about everything, and they have declared her dead.
Carla approaches Mona. Laszlo puts himself in front of his mother and brandishes the Kash knife.
CARLA
Ooo, I do like your boy, Rhys.
MONA
Why did Atlantis abandon us here?
CARLA
Thule was it? The name you heretics gave this land.
MONA
Heretics?
CARLA
Mere pests.
Laszlo lunges at Carla as she enters his range. Carla easily catches his wrist and stops his attack. She squeezes; the knife leaves Laszlo's hand and hits the ground.
CARLA
This is not a bludgeon, boy.
Carla looks down at Laszlo. He struggles to break free from Carla's vicious grip.
CARLA
You know very little. Do you even know what the decorations on the Kash means?
LASZLO
Does it look like I care?!
Laszlo swings his other arm at Carla's temple. As Carla blocks his haymaker, Laszlo hops and delivers a HEADBUTT.
Carla stumbles backward, hand over her nose. She looks at her palm and sees her BLUE BLOOD. Carla looks at Laszlo's bloody forehead and chuckles. Carla licks her blood.
CARLA
Hah! The bloodline has not been completely perverted... This will be your first and last lesson, boy.
Carla dashes at Laszlo. Mona pulls her son back, aims her palms and FLASHES Carla with a burst of light.
Carla SCREECHES. Mona seizes the opportunity. She picks up the Kash knife from the ground and lunges at Carla.
Carla GRINS. With her eyes closed, she violently disarms Mona, steals the Kash and lodges the blade into Mona's stomach. She twists the blade and kicks Mona off.
Mona drops. A pool of BLUE BLOOD stains the sands...
Laszlo runs to his mother's side. She's bleeding out... Luft releases Rhys; he scampers to Mona. Carla lets him.
RHYS
Mona?!
LASZLO
Father! Do something!
Rhys puts pressure on Mona's wound. Smiling proudly, Carla tosses the Kash next to Rhys.
CARLA
You can end her suffering. If you do, I will inform the council. Perhaps they will soften your sentence.
Laszlo aches as he witnesses the horror and futility of his father's attempt to save Mona.
Laszlo furrows his brow; his dread is replaced by pure, unadulterated frustration. He pushes his father aside.
LASZLO
Move!
RHYS
No, Laszlo. Don't!
LASZLO
Shut up! You're pathetic!
Laszlo performs a LAY ON HANDS on Mona's wound. Radiant orange light crackles as Laszlo mends. Mona's wound slowly regenerates. Carla is astonished.
MONA
Please stop, Laszlo. It burns.
CARLA
Origin?! Then--
Carla grabs Laszlo; he resists. Carla knocks him out, puts the boy over her shoulder, and flees to the shore.
RHYS
Hold on, Mona. This can be undone.
MONA
Rhys--
Mona's skin disintegrates and bubbles... She caresses Rhys's cheek and catches his tears.
MONA
Our family... The short time we had together... they were the only good years of my life. Please carry on our dream.
CARLA
Luft, go get him!
MONA
Don't blame him for this.
Luft races to Rhys, takes him, and lugs him toward the shore. Mona stares above the ocean, beyond the horizon. Dawn breaks.
... Mona EXPLODES.
Luft dives to the ground and uses his body to shield Rhys. Mona's blood splatters and MELTS Luft's back. He screams.
Mona's remains steam and solidify into blue, mercurial pools of metal. On Luft's back, the material has MERGED with him; he is on the verge of death.
Carla approaches Rhys, shaking on the ground.
CARLA
You kept him from us this entire time. You selfish fool.
Carla punts him.
END OF TEASER
About the Creator
Henry
Hey there! Hope you enjoyed reading my stuff. I'm a writer and voice actor who loves horror. Currently working on a Radio Drama Horror!
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