Hospital Bed
Leslie’s Finally Decision
Leslie was put in a half coma, she had high anxiety. She had cardio arrest, while trying to removed all the iv needles and tubing. The doctor checked on her. The signed nurses complained, that they could not controlled her from trying to get out of the hospital. The doctor decided to keep her in a coma to heal her pneumonia.
As she lied there, Leslie contemplating was it worth living anymore? She heard voices of love ones but she could not communicate to them how she felt.
( My brother is in the hospital, I worry)
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Mariann Carroll
Proactive for positive change.Born in the City of Chicago ,Illinois.
Multi race .Studied in a foreign country .Fluent in several languages .
fascinated by diversity.A Romantic and a dreamer.Interest in healthy living
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Blessings and Prayers for your Brother ❤️🙏🛐
Sending you love. Hope your brother recovers, <3
So sorry to hear Mariann. 😌 I hope he will be okay and out soon!
your brother and you are in my prayers
Oh no, I'm so sorry. I knew he was in the hospital but I didn't know that he still is there 🥺 Sending you lots of love and hugs. My prayers are with him always. I pray for him to recover soon ❤️
Praying for you and your brother, Mariann.
My prayers are with you, Mariann. Has there been any improvement?
Great job, prayers for your brother. Hope he gets better.
This was very heartfelt and deep, I felt this one. My prayers are with your brother and your family. I added insights and ♥️
Ohh I felt this one, I added insights now, very hearfelt. I hope you’re brother will heal, my prayers are with you all
Oh 🥺 This was deep, Mariann! My husband was in a coma for 12 days back in 2020. I know how unbelievably scary it is. :( Praying for your brother! ❤️🙏
Great writing... Praying 4 your brother! 🙏🏾
Great story! I'm sorry your brother is in the hospital, I pray he gets better.
Well written!
So much story in so few words. Well done Mariann.