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The Boy and the Shop

In a small, forgotten town, a reclusive clockmaker crafts clocks unlike any other—clocks that don’t just tell time but steal it. When a curious boy stumbles into the clockmaker’s shop, he discovers the terrifying truth: time can be given, taken, or traded… and some people will do anything to live a little longer.
The Story
The Boy and the Shop
There was a shop at the edge of town that no one ever visited. Its sign, so worn it was almost unreadable, said “T. Merrick—Clockmaker.” Most people thought the shop had been abandoned years ago. The curtains were always drawn, the door always locked.
But one rainy afternoon, a boy named Oliver discovered the shop was open.
He had been exploring, skipping school as he often did, when he noticed a faint light coming from behind the clockmaker’s window. The rain made it shimmer like a beacon.
Oliver hesitated only a moment before stepping inside.
The Clockmaker
The shop was larger than it looked from the outside. Hundreds of clocks—grandfather clocks, pocket watches, ornate hourglasses—covered the walls and shelves. The ticking was deafening, like a thousand tiny heartbeats.
Behind the counter sat the clockmaker. He was old—older than anyone Oliver had ever seen—with thin white hair and gnarled hands that moved with surprising precision as he worked on a golden pocket watch.
“Don’t touch anything,” the clockmaker said without looking up. His voice was soft, but it carried across the room like a whisper in an empty house.
Oliver shoved his hands into his pockets. “I just wanted to look.”
The clockmaker raised his head, his sharp blue eyes locking onto Oliver’s. “Looking is dangerous, boy. Time is not a toy.”
The Clocks That Steal Time
Oliver ignored the warning and wandered deeper into the shop. That’s when he noticed something strange. Some clocks had labels beneath them—small, handwritten tags that read things like “Ten Years of Joy” or “Five Days of Sorrow.”
“What are these?” Oliver asked.
The clockmaker appeared beside him so suddenly that Oliver jumped.
“They are trades,” the clockmaker said quietly. “A day for a dollar. A year for gold. People give me their time, and I keep it safe.”
Oliver frowned. “You mean you steal it.”
The clockmaker’s face darkened. “No. I only take what is given.”
He picked up a glass clock that pulsed faintly with a silver light. “Some people waste their time. Others would trade anything for a little more.”
Oliver stared at the clock. “Can you… give time back?”
The clockmaker smiled, but there was no warmth in it. “Everything comes with a price.”
The Deal
Oliver thought about his mother, who worked long hours at the factory. She was always tired, always saying she wished she had more time for him.
“How much for an hour?” Oliver blurted.
The clockmaker tilted his head. “An hour for you? It would cost more than you think.”
Oliver scowled. “I have some money.”
“I don’t take money,” the clockmaker said. “I take time. Give me a day of your life, and I’ll give you an hour to do with as you please.”
Oliver hesitated. A day seemed like nothing. He had thousands of them ahead of him, didn’t he?
“Fine,” he said.
The clockmaker pulled out a small, silver hourglass. “Hold this,” he instructed.
Oliver grasped it. For a moment, nothing happened. Then, he felt a tugging sensation deep in his chest, like something was being pulled out of him. When he looked down, he saw the sand in the hourglass turning gold.
The clockmaker nodded. “A fair trade.”
He handed Oliver a small, glowing watch. “Here is your hour. Spend it wisely.”
The Truth
At first, Oliver was thrilled. He used the extra hour to play in the fields, watch the clouds roll by, and imagine a world where his mother didn’t have to work so hard. But when he returned home, something was wrong.
His mother was sitting at the kitchen table, staring at nothing.
“What’s wrong?” Oliver asked.
She didn’t answer. She looked at him with tired eyes he didn’t recognize.
“Mom?”
Her voice was barely a whisper. “I don’t know where the time goes.”
Oliver froze. He remembered the golden sand in the hourglass. He remembered the clocks labeled “Ten Years of Joy.”
The clockmaker hadn’t been trading time—he’d been stealing it. And now, Oliver had given him a day he could never get back.
The Confrontation
Oliver ran back to the shop, bursting through the door.
“You lied to me!” he shouted.
The clockmaker didn’t look up from his work. “I warned you. Time is not a toy.”
“You’re stealing people’s lives!” Oliver cried.
The clockmaker’s eyes flashed. “I take only what is offered.”
Oliver grabbed the nearest clock and smashed it on the ground. The silver light inside burst free, and for a moment, Oliver swore he heard laughter—someone’s stolen joy, finally escaping.
The clockmaker stood slowly. “You should not have done that.”
“I want my time back,” Oliver said, his voice trembling.
The clockmaker studied him for a long moment. Then he reached into his coat and pulled out Oliver’s golden hourglass. “A trade, then,” he said. “Break this, and your day will return. But know this: time taken can never be unfelt. What’s lost is lost.”
Oliver grabbed the hourglass and smashed it against the counter. The golden sand burst into the air, swirling like sparks.
The Ending
Oliver woke up in the field, the sun setting in the distance. He ran home, his heart pounding.
His mother was there, cooking dinner, humming softly to herself. She looked up as he entered, smiling. “Where have you been, Ollie?”
Oliver swallowed hard. “Just… out.”
That night, Oliver threw his watch into the river and vowed never to return to the clockmaker’s shop. But sometimes, when the house was quiet and the clocks ticked softly in the dark, he swore he could still hear the faint sound of sand slipping through glass.
About the Creator
Mira Langston
Creative and driven, Mira Langston brings fresh ideas and passion to every project, blending writing, art, and business to craft engaging, unique experiences with dedication and innovation."


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