
Hearts are planted in soils of uncertainty....roses grow from arteries and veins sprout pencil sharp aches and pains in a profound amalgamation of jumbled, tumbling emotions.
When comes a tentative knock at heart's door, be careful to whom you open it.
Here lies a poetic back-and-forth between Tristan and Delilah, steeped in the offer of possibilities - hearts as gardens of uncertainty, blooming with pain and beauty. Their dialogue unfolds like petals, each line a thorn or a tremble.
Tristan stood beneath the willow, fingers stained from tending the soil.
The garden had grown wild again.
Delilah approached, her boots crushing petals.
She carried a folded letter...it felt like a wound.
Tristan:
"Did you plant this ache, Delilah? These roses - too red, too loud. They scream in my chest."

Delilah:
"I only watered what was already trembling. Your heart was a greenhouse of ghosts before I arrived."
Tristan:
"And yet you knocked. You knocked like a whisper with teeth."
Delilah:
"I knocked because I saw the vines curling toward the moon. I thought they wanted company."
Tristan:
"They wanted silence. They wanted to bleed in peace."
Delilah:
"Then why did your veins write me poems? Why did your arteries bloom my name?"
Tristan:
"Because pain is fertile. Because uncertainty is a soil that sings when touched."
Delilah:
"And I touched it. I touched it with trembling hands and a heart full of broken pieces."
Tristan:
"You drew me. You drew me with graphite and grief. Now I’m smudged across your memory."
Delilah:
"Smudged, yes. But still visible. Still pulsing."
Tristan:
"Be careful, Delilah. The next knock might be mine. And I carry thorns."
Delilah:
"Then knock gently. I’ve planted new roses. They remember you."
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Tristan and Delilah’s garden of aching hearts is being observed by a raven, curious and ancient, perched on the fencepost like a punctuation mark - inserting itself into the privacy of their unfolding story.
The wind shifted. A feather fell.
On the crooked fencepost, the raven landed - head tilted, one eye gleaming like a new coin. Curious, it listened.
Delilah:
"Do you think the roses remember pain, Tristan? Or do they just bloom because they must?"
Tristan:
"They bloom because the soil is soaked with lived and unlived lives. Every petal is a sigh we never spoke."
The raven blinked. It had heard many things - bones cracking under frost, sad melodies sung to empty cribs - but this was new.
Delilah:
"I opened the door once. The knock was gentle. But what came in wore my father’s voice and my mother’s grief."
Tristan:
"I opened mine too. It was you. You came in with a bouquet of apologies and a suitcase full of mirrors."
The raven cawed softly, not interrupting, just marking the moment. It wondered: were these humans planting love or burying it?
Delilah:
"Maybe hearts aren’t doors. Maybe they’re gardens with many gates. Maybe anyone can walk in and leave footprints."
Tristan:
"Then let’s plant thorns. Let’s teach the roses to bite."
The raven tilted its head again. Somewhere in its feathered remembering, it recalled a poem about blood blooming in silence.
Delilah:
"Do you think the raven understands us?"
Tristan:
"No. But it listens. And that’s more than most."
The raven fluffed its wings, considering. It would stay a while longer. These humans were strange - but their conversation of joy and sorrow was delicious.
The Raven speaks
The raven blinked once, then twice.
Its voice was not a caw, but a ripple in the air - like wine spilled across silence.
Raven:
"‘You plant hearts like seeds, but forget the weather.
Rain remembers. So does rot.’"
Tristan stepped back, startled. Delilah leaned in, her breath caught in the thorns.
Raven:
"‘I’ve seen gardens like yours.
One grew from a widow’s sigh.
Another from a child’s last laugh.’"
Delilah:
"Do they survive?"
Raven:
"‘They bloom. They bleed. They become stories.’"
Tristan:
"And ours?"
The raven tilted its head, considering.
Raven:
"‘Yours is still soft. Still trembling.
But beware the knock that wears a smile too wide.
Some visitors come not to enter - but to unravel."
The wind stirred the roses. One petal fell, landing on Tristan’s shoe like a warning.
Delilah:
"Why do you watch us?"
Raven:
"‘Because you speak in ache.
And ache is the only language I trust.’"
It fluttered its wings, but did not leave.
The garden had more to say.
About the Creator
Antoni De'Leon
Everything has its wonders, even darkness and silence, and I learn, whatever state I may be in, therein to be content. (Helen Keller).
Tiffany, Dhar, JBaz, Rommie, Grz, Paul, Mike, Sid, NA, Michelle L, Caitlin, Sarah P. List unfinished.




Comments (6)
Beautifully written and richly layered. The interplay between love, memory, and pain creates a timeless atmosphere that feels both intimate and mythic.
"‘Because you speak in ache. And ache is the only language I trust.’" "Because pain is fertile. Because uncertainty is a soil that sings when touched." "Then why did your veins write me poems? Why did your arteries bloom my name?" Omgggg these lines! How did you even come up with these??? Soooo poetic!
interesting take on this-love their dialogue
This is an intriguing twist on the Challenge. It's very Shakespearean, in a way. Nicely done.
What a beautiful conversation between the three of them. I think if you could add stage directions this would be an awesome play.
I like this conversation in the garden. Does roses 🌹 get hurt? This is deep