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By Sudais ZakwanPublished about 3 hours ago 3 min read

Why would an innocent child ever belong among terrifying pirates?

Mazhar Sahib was a writer who specialized in stories for children. One evening, he sat at his desk, lost in thought. He had to write a story for a special issue, but despite trying for a long time, no strong idea came to mind. Whenever this happened, he usually began by imagining something visually, because he was also very good at drawing.

He took out a white sheet of paper, sharpened his pencil, and looked out the window where sparrows were chirping on a neem tree. His mind wandered until a sudden thought struck him: why not write a story about sea pirates? Coincidentally, he had never written such a story before. His hand moved across the paper, sketching a sailing boat. Soon, three pirates with frightening faces appeared. Then he drew an iron cage on one side of the boat with a lion inside it.

After that, he added a beautiful two-year-old child with golden hair sitting nearby. Immediately, he hesitated. What business could such an innocent child have with ruthless pirates? He thought it was a mistake and began to erase the child, but his inner creative voice stopped him. If you want to write a unique story, include the child.

Reluctantly, Mazhar Sahib accepted the challenge. He began weaving the plot. The three pirates were childhood friends who once lived in a coastal village and worked as fishermen. One of them could read and write. Over time, greed took over, and they began looting sea travelers. They left their village and built a secret hideout on an uninhabited island.

One day, while searching for food near a forest, they found a lion cub alone. They captured it, planning to sell it, but no buyer appeared. The cub grew attached to them and lived in a cage on their boat.

Later, they attacked a small pleasure boat and kidnapped a sleeping child, hoping to demand ransom. Only afterward did they realize they didn’t know the child’s identity. They laughed at their foolishness but were left wondering what to do. The child, named Adi, stayed with them.

At this point, Mazhar Sahib stopped writing. Days passed, and he couldn’t move the story forward. Frustrated, he abandoned the manuscript. Much later, when he rediscovered it and was about to tear it up, his inner voice urged him to wait one more week.

At the end of that week, inspiration struck. When he returned to the manuscript, he was shocked to find that it had doubled in length. Someone else had written the rest.

In the continuation, the pirates fled to a city, sold the lion to a zoo, and raised Adi lovingly. They rented a house, bought him clothes and toys, read him stories, and took him to parks. Through Adi, they experienced kindness and happiness for the first time.

Adi eventually asked why he couldn’t go to school. Though conflicted, the pirates admitted him. Over time, they abandoned crime completely and started an honest fish business.

However, Mazhar Sahib changed the ending. The pirates were eventually found by the police. They confessed their crimes and were punished by the court. Adi was returned to his parents. Justice was served, proving that repentance does not erase responsibility.

This story reminds us that creativity often grows from difficulty, and true change begins with responsibility. Even when people improve and choose the right path, they must still accept the consequences of their past actions. Honesty, education, and justice together shape better individuals and stronger societies. and justice together shape better individuals and stronger societies.

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About the Creator

Sudais Zakwan

Sudais Zakwan – Storyteller of Emotions

Sudais Zakwan is a passionate story writer known for crafting emotionally rich and thought-provoking stories that resonate with readers of all ages. With a unique voice and creative flair.

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