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Habits Die Hard

Microfiction on Envy

By Michelle Liew Tsui-LinPublished 10 months ago 1 min read
Habits Die Hard
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What others have may not be what we need. MIchelle Liew

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Harold had a unique talent---he mimicked traits to perfection. An eyelift, a glance, twitch of the eyebrow--once he did so, the habit was his to keep.

At first, they were just harmless party tricks. He got his thrills from a musician's singing ability, an artist's hand, a mathematician's logic. He didn't take anything of apparent value, just qualities that made people what they were.

Then, he thought---what if he reshaped himself? The possibilities were endless. He got greedy. His next victim was a locksmith who could fashion any key.

No one cared at first---he took only invisible things. One night, he imitated a woman's stutter.

With it came the teasing behind his back. The hidden laughter. The slow diminishing of confidence.

Some traits exist to rein in something else.

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This work is entirely original. Any AI tags is coincidental.

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About the Creator

Michelle Liew Tsui-Lin

Hi, i am an English Language teacher cum freelance writer with a taste for pets, prose and poetry. When I'm not writing my heart out, I'm playing with my three dogs, Zorra, Cloudy and Snowball.

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  • Tiffany Gordon10 months ago

    Fabulous writing & message! 💕

  • Andrea Corwin 10 months ago

    Great job! Where did this idea come from, LOL.

  • Ah, this is what happens if we get greedy. Loved your story!

  • Mother Combs10 months ago

    horrible Harold, karma is cruel

  • Test10 months ago

    This is a fascinating concept, exploring the unseen consequences of coveting and acquiring others' characteristics. The line, "Some traits exist to rein in something else," is profoundly insightful and adds a chilling layer of moral complexity. I love how the story subtly shifts from harmless fun to a haunting reflection on identity and unintended burdens.🌞

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