What others have may not be what we need. MIchelle Liew
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Harold had a unique talent---he mimicked traits to perfection. An eyelift, a glance, twitch of the eyebrow--once he did so, the habit was his to keep.
At first, they were just harmless party tricks. He got his thrills from a musician's singing ability, an artist's hand, a mathematician's logic. He didn't take anything of apparent value, just qualities that made people what they were.
Then, he thought---what if he reshaped himself? The possibilities were endless. He got greedy. His next victim was a locksmith who could fashion any key.
No one cared at first---he took only invisible things. One night, he imitated a woman's stutter.
With it came the teasing behind his back. The hidden laughter. The slow diminishing of confidence.
Some traits exist to rein in something else.
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This work is entirely original. Any AI tags is coincidental.
About the Creator
Michelle Liew Tsui-Lin
Hi, i am an English Language teacher cum freelance writer with a taste for pets, prose and poetry. When I'm not writing my heart out, I'm playing with my three dogs, Zorra, Cloudy and Snowball.



Comments (5)
Fabulous writing & message! 💕
Great job! Where did this idea come from, LOL.
Ah, this is what happens if we get greedy. Loved your story!
horrible Harold, karma is cruel
This is a fascinating concept, exploring the unseen consequences of coveting and acquiring others' characteristics. The line, "Some traits exist to rein in something else," is profoundly insightful and adds a chilling layer of moral complexity. I love how the story subtly shifts from harmless fun to a haunting reflection on identity and unintended burdens.🌞