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Freedom or Fire, Future's Precursor

An epistolary prelude to an entry for Future Fragments

By Paul StewartPublished about a year ago 3 min read

To anyone who may wish to listen,

I am writing this when I should be focusing on the future. Weaving words I've picked up from here and there into a stuttered, not quite paradisaic, but hope-filled future. Two stories are on my mind that are begging to be told. But, my mind is fried. For the moment at least. My mind can't cope with weaving words... into a stuttered, realistic if still fanciful take on the future. The future we all have ahead of us. I will get there, but for now I am writing this ridiculous poem. A stab in the dark at clearing my mind a little, as I cough up all kinds of muck from my lungs and try to stay focused. I see various railway stations in my mind, a catastrophic ending of life in each around the world at the same time, relative to time zones. London Waterloo I was defeated, you won the war

Waterloo, Shinjuku, where I saw my one true love board the train forever gone. I sat on a bench in Milan Centrale and thought of my time in Grand Central Terminal.

Promise to love you forevermore I see lies that the future governments, the governments in power right now, have woven, even better than I am with words. The lies and twisting of freedom as the enemy of the state and the people. I see the subtle subjugation of the people, who eat up the lies like mana on the floor. Freedom or public execution, trial by mob, trial live in person and direct into your phone. The world is safe, safe from harm. The harm of those who would stand against the government. Safe from those who would question the safety itself. Stand against those who have done so much to protect and prepare the world for a more peaceful existence. Where disagreements between nations are handled in boardrooms and disagreements between the common man are extinguished before they can become a problem. Extinguished like the perpetrators themselves. But all for the end goal of peace and stability.

Peace and stability?

They may call it that,

but I think they mean the other thing.

Their peace is a muzzle.

Their stability a cage. The lie settles in, over and over, until it becomes the truth they tell their children. They remind us often enough "Safe, Stable, Peace, Strength." chanted in call and response to the repeated mantra "Disobedience is chaos". Ignore this old man rambling. I am just a passer-by, for all you know. I am just an old man, old fighter, who remembers the way things were before. I've fought shadows, shouted at the void. Maybe you'll listen.

Maybe

you'll see what I couldn't in time. But, don't worry as I'm sure it's nothing to worry about. Sure it's nothing to be alarmed about. The future is coming. Whether we

stand up and fight

for

freedom with fire

or

decide to accept the lead taken by those in the seats of power.

The future is coming. Whether we stand and burn in freedom's blazing fire or sit and choke on the lies they’ve woven so tightly, it’s coming. We will choose. Or we’ll let them choose for us. Either way, it’s coming, and it will burn.

Yours truly,

Just a rambling old man

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Thanks for reading!

Author's Notes: So, with time running out, I should be working on my Future Fragments piece. I have at least one, but also possibly two entries that I have not finished yet. Have a horrible cough and a temperature that's dancing high and low, which is not helping me focus. So, as a way of clearing my mind a little I thought I would just write...something. This epistolary was written almost 100% stream-of-consciousness style and could be seen as a prelude to my entry for the Future Fragments Challenge.

I don't expect it all to make sense, until the other story is complete and published, but maybe it helps whet the appetite for more?

If you have the time or inclination, beyond reading, liking and commenting on this piece, as you are all so good at doing, here are some other things:

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Paul Stewart

Award-Winning Writer, Poet, Scottish-Italian, Subversive.

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  • Dharrsheena Raja Segarranabout a year ago

    Oh no, I'm so sorry you're having a fever and cough. Please rest well. Hope you recover soon, Sir Paul

  • Michelle Liew Tsui-Linabout a year ago

    This was a thought-provoking piece, Paul, and looking at the state of the world these days.....prophetic. Let's just hope that the future will bode better than expected.

  • Karan w. about a year ago

    This is amazing! Very thought provoking ✨

  • D.K. Shepardabout a year ago

    Now I’m very intrigued to see your future fragments entry whenever it’s finished! Hope you feel better soon, Paul!

  • Grz Colmabout a year ago

    …“as you are all so good at doing”. 😁😆 Sorry you are so crook. I don’t even know how you pumped that out with all that you were pumping out from your lungs! I liked the tone. Yes. Interesting prequel. Feel better shortly.

  • C. Rommial Butlerabout a year ago

    Well-wrought! In our post-truth world, retaining the truth as the arbiter of our conscience is paramount. We who fight with shadows know what lurks in the void. Be at ease, and the ideas will flow. Eternity is our canvas.

  • Komalabout a year ago

    What a fiery ramble! Paul you sure knows how to mix wisdom with drama. Railways, freedom, and some ominous government spice—this prelude is stirring up curiosity for your main story. Get well soon, and bring on the fragments! ✨

  • Mark Grahamabout a year ago

    Hope you feel better soon and even not feeling well you can really deliver the writings that make people feel and think.

  • John Coxabout a year ago

    I have seen the future and it is already here. Most of us have simply failed to notice. Surprisingly fruitful ramblings for a man in the throes of a fever. In fact I would judge it one your more powerful fever dreams! I hope you get better soon, Paul! Being sick is a huge pain.

  • Andrew C McDonaldabout a year ago

    Fascinating trails in this many pathed stream of consciousness. Very well rambled. 🤗

  • Mother Combsabout a year ago

    I like this. But I hope you start feeling better soon

  • Testabout a year ago

    Wow this is so original approach, I like the stream of consciousness, also I hope you get better soon and write your entry!

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