Fear: A Fierce Fighter
Unspoken Challenges
Her heart pounded like a drum in her chest
everything she was taught, hesitated
The will to live now surely, put to the test
the angst she felt inside, underrated
*
She smelled the mud, as the sweat stung her eyes
the growling cut through every fiber
Would this moment be when she met her demise
or would fate send a savior to find her?
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Her mind quickly sorts through lessons in her head
the rule book, the bible, of hikers
The ones meant to prepare, and protect you from death
longing for veins now filled up with ichor
*
She tried to self soothe,
to calm her breath and heartrate
Told herself a half-truth
the bears motive, hibernate
*
But the truth stood 6'4,
he was just outside of her sight
With bared teeth and brawn
and an immense appetite
*
This bear held no regard
for the badges she'd earned
Hungar bit, deep and hard
like a lover's heart, spurned
*
She managed to hide
tucked in, kept out of sight
Her whole body liquified
as she watched him go by
*
Nose in the air, his prey still at bay
even if someone could hear
She would have nothing to say
her voice stolen, by that massive bear
*
Moments had passed
to her, felt like a lifetime
To her hope, she held fast
her courage, redefined
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She gathered some sticks
to build her a fire
The flames might do the trick
so, she constructed a pyre
*
She hoped that the irony
wouldn't be lost on the hunter
She found it quite funny
given the distress she was under
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Striking the stone
the sparks flew, just like lightning
She knew she wasn't alone
the twigs snapping, was frightening
*
His shadow grew taller than the height of the flames
his breath felt like hot ashes
She could barely contain
screaming out, through the branches
*
As she clamored to her feet
the bear entered her campsite
She felt the ungodly heat
her face, a pale ashen white
*
The bear let out a roar
in the air, was a wildness
She'd not felt before
from her mouth, nothingness
*
She sprang into action
her fear, taken over
Like a freak chain reaction
more a fighter than lover
*
That bear took a shot
from her fragile right hook
Caught him in his blind spot
left him feeling quite shook
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He wobbled his head, to gather his senses
spit flew like embers, brought them back face to face
He looked square in her eyes; he thought her defenseless
that jab to the nose, delivered, coup de grace
*
He roared one more time
leaning in toward the fire
Then like he'd committed a crime
disappeared in the brier
*
She collapsed to the ground
the fire's flames, danced around her
In the air, was no sound
as the wind slowly stirred
*
A gasp left her lungs
as she struggled for another
Silent, stayed her tongue
till she could pull it together
*
Then she gently began to stoking the fire
to remind her contender
After what had transpired
she wanted him to remember
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She was held to the fire
and aptly, put to the test
This would be his reminder
life was spared at her behest
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Kelli Sheckler-Amsden
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Comments (7)
Loved this. You really conveyed the scene well
The imagery in this is phenomenal; I can feel the immensity of the animal in this poem. You've done a fantastic job!
Magnificent imagery and poetic story telling. 🥰
Ah man, I wanted to bear to eat her. Lol! Loved this rhyming story!
I loved this from beginning to end. Her moment of fight reminded me of "Miss Congeniality" after the stage hands had drunk the water from the crystal glasses Sandra Bullock was supposed to play so she decided to demonstrate the art of self-defense on her partner instead.
thrilling my friend, very good read 😊😊
Great work! Fantastic and heart pounding! I could feel my heart pounding in my chest while I was reading this!