'Do something with your life.' He yelled, and then reminded me. 'I came from nothing and worked to become a multi millionaire.'
I shrugged.
'Your sister sponsors two foundations, you should too.'
I had a business. It was selling drugs to all my rich friends, I was making a shit ton of money. I just couldn't tell him.
I met my 'partners' that night at the new hospital being built. We argued about some missing cash.
I began chuckling, as the cement poured over me. My father got his wish, I was now part of a foundation.
About the Creator
JBaz
I have enjoyed writing for most of my life, never professionally.
I wish to now share my stories with others, lets see where it goes.
Born and raised on the Canadian Prairies, I currently reside on the West Coast. I call both places home.
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An Instruction Manual for Keeping Your Child Alive:
Author’s Note This story contains references to childhood trauma and a parent’s experience supporting a child through recovery, including moments of emotional crisis. The focus is not on graphic detail, but on a family’s survival, vigilance, and the quiet, ongoing work of caregiving.
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Comments (10)
The pun at the end got me!! This was unexpected and such a great Microfiction!! Love what you did here JBaz!
Wow! What a plot twist!! This was amazing.
ohh. That was great. Wasn't expecting that ending.
This was the best. Love anything with concrete shoes. Great story Jbaz
Damn that was awesome. I feel like I shouldn't have laughed but I definitely did 😂. Really well done
Shock ending made me laugh 😂
I guess every business comes with some risks.😉
Humorous twisted ending 🤣
And you said I'm dark and twisted 🤣. Well done with this one 👏👏👏
OMG...This is the best!! LOL