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**Evil House**

Horror

By Abdul QayyumPublished 2 years ago 6 min read

For generations, the dilapidated mansion had stood on the outskirts of the town, its overgrown grounds and decaying façade a sharp contrast to the immaculate homes in the area. Nobody dared to go there after sundown; it was a land of terrible tales and whispered legends. They said that evil itself lived inside the house and that it was cursed. To Emily, though, it was an alluring enigma.

Emily had always had a fascination with the strange and mysterious. She loved local history and would spend her weekends looking through ancient archives and investigating abandoned buildings. The aristocratic home, dubbed the Hawthorne House, was the height of her interest. She had perused every book and article and heard every tale. She made up her mind to find out its mysteries tonight.

The moon created lengthy shadows on the gravel road as she got closer to the house. The smell of damp earth and rot permeated the air. Emily shuddered and pulled her coat closer to her body. She pulled open the front door, which creaked because it was barely hanging on its hinges.

The house was a labyrinth of dim passageways with furnishings covered in dust. The ceiling was covered in cobwebs, and the floorboards creaked beneath her weight. As she moved further inside the house, her flashlight beam flickered, showing pictures of grim-faced forefathers and long-forgotten artifacts. She experienced a strange feeling of familiarity, as though the mansion was luring her in.

She discovered a large, elaborate mirror in the grand parlor. Its surface was fractured and tarnished, yet for some reason Emily wanted to clean it. She observed that her reflection seemed to be moving erratically as she wiped away the dirt. She wrote it off as a trick of the illumination.

The temperature suddenly decreased. Emily felt a cold shudder run down her spine as her breath puffed out in little clouds. As she turned to go, the door slammed shut with such power that the entire house vibrated. She tried to open it in a panic, but it was securely secured.

"Who's there?" Her voice quivered as she yelled.

Her own voice echoed, but there was no response. The shadows appeared to shift on their own, and the air became thicker. Emily's flashlight died when it flickered once more, leaving her in the dark.

A deep, gritty chuckle reverberated across the space. Emily reached for her phone and held it up to cast a little light, her heart racing. She caught sight of someone in the mirror: a woman with sunken eyes and a twisted smile, dressed in a ragged outfit. With a skeletal hand, the woman pointed squarely at Emily.

The woman said, "Leave this place," in a voice as sharp as nails on a blackboard. "Or suffer the same fate as those before you."

Emily staggered back after knocking herself over a toppled chair. Mind racing, she crawled and approached the door. The tales had been authentic. There was life in the home, and it swore. She needed to leave.

She felt a rush of adrenaline and banged the door with her shoulder. It buckled, sending her tumbling into the corridor. Running, her footsteps echoing in the empty house, she didn't turn to look behind. She sensed the presence behind her and could hear the murmurs getting louder.

Breathless, she dashed to the front door and threw it open, bursting into the darkness. She fell to the ground and started crying as the cool air hit her like a wave.

Behind her, the mansion loomed, its windows empty and dark. Emily realized she was fortunate to have escaped. She would never forget the horrors she had seen; the darkness of the Hawthorne House had been exposed. She could still hear the woman's laughter ringing in her head as she staggered off, a terrifying reminder of the darkness that lay beyond.

Emily shook her hands and fumbled with the keys as she got to her car. Half expecting to see the ghostly figure watching her, she cast a backward glance at the mansion. However, all that was visible was blackness. Heart thumping in her chest, she leaped into the driver's seat and drove off.

Once she was back at her house, she attempted to persuade herself that everything had been a figment of her hyperactive imagination, a hallucination. She got into bed, but she had trouble sleeping. Her nerves tingle at every creak and moan of her house, and every time she closed her eyes, she saw the woman's face.

The following day, Emily conducted research—what she did best. She went through historical documents and old newspaper clippings, searching for any reference to the figure she saw in the mirror. She was deeply chilled by what she discovered. The individual in question was Lydia Hawthorne, the final surviving member of the Hawthorne lineage. She passed away inexplicably after being charged with witchcraft. Her remains were never discovered.

Emily couldn't get rid of the notion that Lydia's ghost was still there, waiting to wreak havoc on everyone who ventured inside. She thought about turning around, but changed her mind when she saw the lifeless, icy eyes reflecting back at her in the mirror. She was aware that she was fortunate to have survived.

After a few weeks, Emily made an effort to move on. She lost herself in other endeavors, staying away from anything that brought the Hawthorne House to mind. However, the dreams continued, and she started to sense that someone was watching her. She frequently heard faint murmurs in the dead of night, and shadows appeared to move on their own.

She was going through old pictures in her attic one evening when she came upon a picture that gave her the chills. It was a picture of her great-grandmother, grinning broadly as she stood in front of the Hawthorne House. A woman in a frayed dress stood behind her, barely visible in the darkness, her sunken eyes staring directly at the camera.

As Emily read the words "Lydia and Margaret, 1923" on the back of the picture, her hands began to shake. Lydia Hawthorne was known to her great-grandmother. It might be luxury .

Emily came to a choice after realizing she would never be able to escape the history of the Hawthorne House. She would come back, not as an inquisitive stranger but as a descendent looking for answers. Equipped with this novel insight, she mustered her bravery and readied herself for the encounter she was certain would come.

She took a car back to the estate that evening. The mansion had a ghostly radiance from the full moon. The whispering resumed as she entered and the temperature dropped. She went to the large parlor and stood in front of the mirror.

"Lydia," she uttered in a firm voice. "I recognize you. I am aware of your experience. I am the great-granddaughter of Margaret. I reached here to avoid this..

The mirror rippled, revealing Lydia's figure with angry, blazing eyes. Emily refused to back down and held up the picture. "You are no longer required to haunt this place. You're at liberty."

Lydia's face relaxed, and warmth filled the room. The spectral form extended its arm to make contact with the picture. She said, "Thank you," in a quiet, relieved voice that was no longer hostile.

The mansion appeared to exhale at that very moment, letting go of centuries' worth of suffering. The house remained motionless as Lydia's figure dimmed. Emily was relieved to have at last put the ghost to rest.

Emily felt at ease as she made her final exit from the Hawthorne House. Now that the home was free of the curse, it could finally be forgotten. She'd walked into the dark and come out stronger, knowing that certain mysteries were intended to be answered.

Humor

About the Creator

Abdul Qayyum

I Abdul Qayyum is also a passionate advocate for social justice and human rights. I use his platform to shine a light on marginalized communities and highlight their struggles, aiming to foster empathy and drive positive change.

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  • T. Licht2 years ago

    Wow creepy. The imagery literally makes you think you're there, experiencing it together with character. Loved this. ❤️

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