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Dave's Wish

A Story Every Day in 2024 Oct 15th 289/366

By Rachel DeemingPublished about a year ago 2 min read
Dave's Wish
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Bethan

I want to know what she means by "photos" but I don't feel like I can quiz her when she's so distressed although I know that it will rankle me until I get the chance. Did she send photos to someone else? There were other things too I wanted to know and not just about what else was on the film. What about her life? I need details. Was my husband leading a double life? I think she knows.

We've shared numbers now. Perhaps I can ask her via text when she's calmer. Katie's agreed to check in with me regularly so that I know she's alright. I've told her that I won't let anything happen to her and that she can call me any time and I'll be there.

It feels good to be useful. I don't want to leave her but I need to think and I can't be there when...others come home. There's been a lot to take in today. She tells me that her mum is due from work and it might be better if I leave and I agree but I feel a wrench, a separation anxiety that I haven't felt in years.

Once I get in my car and start driving, I bawl. I struggle to see the road and my hands are shaking on the wheel but I drive. I can't stop because I feel like if I do, I don't know what I'll do. I cry and cry until I can cry no more and once the storm has passed, I feel better, more calm, back in control.

I'm still in the dark, more than ever! I wanted answers but I've just ended up with more questions. The identity of the boys - that's all I wanted! Just to ask them what they knew. And now, I've got worms squirming out of a can that I wasn't responsible for opening.

Dave

I'm going to wait. I'm not going to say anything to Katie. I'm going to see if she says anything to me. Let's see how this plays out. Bethan's gone quiet now. Perhaps she'll leave me alone.

I just want no drama.

***

366 words

I don't think Dave's going to get his wish.

This all started here:

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Rachel Deeming

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  • Paul Stewartabout a year ago

    This is closing in on...something. Dave's not looking like a great person right now. Kinda loving Bethan though and just feel for Luke and Matthew.

  • D.K. Shepardabout a year ago

    Not a chance, Dave! Poor Bethan. That's a lot to process! Glad the tale continues! Thanks for sharing them with us, Rachel!

  • C. Rommial Butlerabout a year ago

    Poor Bethan! I've gone through all of these now in order, and must reiterate my earlier sentiment. Each of these stories, as I picked them up randomly, gave me something to chew on and, through context, keyed me into what happened around them. This only enhances their connectivity when read in order. Very well-wrought!

  • Caroline Cravenabout a year ago

    I am not sure Dave deserves a drama free existence to be honest! This was great. Glad you're back and writing this series.

  • Mark Gagnonabout a year ago

    Drama, why would there be drama? Yah, Right!

  • Cathy holmesabout a year ago

    Yeah, I don't think Dave is going to get his wish.

  • John Coxabout a year ago

    Dave is the fat spider in the middle of this web whether he likes it or not. History is starting to repeat itself with a second daughter!

  • Cindy Calderabout a year ago

    This was such an emotional one. Your reader could feel Bethan’s tumultuous arrays of emotions - they were palpable!

  • Yep… I agree with Lana✅… keen for the next instalment 🤔.

  • My heart broke so much for Bethan 😭😭😭😭😭😭😭

  • Lana V Lynxabout a year ago

    I think Dave deserves whatever is coming for him. Great read, Rachel, and as suspenseful as always.

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