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Crossing the Threshold

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By Engr BilalPublished 11 days ago 3 min read
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The stone tiles beneath her boots were cool and uneven, each one answering her passage with a soft scrape and whisper. Pebbles pressed themselves into the grooves between the stones, muttering their age-old complaints as if disturbed from a long, necessary rest. Above, the early air hovered between night and morning, holding its breath while the sky decided what color it wished to be.

She slowed as the path narrowed, the hush deepening around her. A wrought-iron arch rose ahead, its curves tangled with climbing roses and silvered with the remnants of night’s moisture. Droplets clung to each thorn and petal, trembling under the weight of light not yet fully born. When her fingers wrapped around the latch, the metal was cold and damp, alive with a quiet hum, as if the gate itself remembered every soul that had passed through.

The hinge protested gently when she pushed, releasing a long, tired sigh. Dew scattered downward in a delicate rain, tapping against stone and soil in soft percussion. The moment she stepped through, the world seemed to shift—sound deepened, scent sharpened, and the garden claimed her entirely.

The main path stretched forward, pale and inviting, while narrower trails branched off like thoughts that tempted wandering. Low hedges formed gentle curves rather than rigid lines, encouraging exploration instead of obedience. Ferns unfurled beside the walkways, their fronds still curled at the tips like secrets yet to be spoken. Moss padded the bases of trees, cushioning ancient roots that twisted beneath the soil like buried stories.

Walls of living green enclosed the space—camellias, boxwood, and flowering quince woven together into a textured tapestry. Between the leaves, blossoms burst forth in deliberate defiance: coral, ivory, deep wine, and blushing peach. Bees traced lazy spirals through the air, humming their devotion, while butterflies—painted in amber and indigo—drifted from bloom to bloom like notes in a wandering melody.

Beds of flowers flanked the paths, their arrangement both careful and wild. Lilies lifted their chins with quiet confidence, while anemones trembled at the slightest breeze. Lavender leaned outward, perfuming the air with a calm insistence. Poppies, reckless and radiant, scattered their color without apology, daring anyone to look away.

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At the far corners of the garden, climbing vines reached upward, claiming the stone walls inch by inch. Jasmine and honeysuckle tangled together, drawing moths and early birds into their perfumed sanctuary. Sparrows hopped along the ledges, their chatter light and conspiratorial, while somewhere overhead, a crow announced its presence with measured authority.

She followed the curve of the path as it circled inward, drawn toward the heart of the space. A shallow pool rested there, edged in smooth slate worn by decades of hands and weather. Water lilies floated across its surface, their broad leaves catching reflections of the sky now tinged with pale gold. Beneath them, fish moved in slow, deliberate arcs—silver flashes, shadows, brief moments of brilliance that vanished as quickly as they appeared.

She knelt and brushed the water with her fingertips. Cool ripples spread outward, disrupting reflections and stirring the fish into sudden motion. The pool responded with a gentle murmur, as though amused by the interruption.

Beyond the pool stood the house.

Its presence was unassuming yet resolute, built of pale stone softened by age and ivy. Windows reflected the rising sun in fractured patterns, while wooden shutters stood half-open, caught between welcome and restraint. The porch extended like an open hand, its railings worn smooth by years of touch. Wind chimes hung near the door, stirring faintly, their notes low and thoughtful.

She crossed the open space slowly, aware of the subtle shift beneath her feet as stone gave way to wood. The boards creaked—not in protest, but in recognition. Hanging planters swayed slightly, their trailing vines brushing her shoulders like a greeting. Somewhere inside, something moved: the scrape of a chair, the soft echo of footsteps.

She paused at the door.

The moment stretched, filled with layered sounds—the flutter of leaves, the distant call of a bird, the steady pulse of her own breath. This threshold held weight. Not the kind that crushed, but the kind that asked for intention.

When she raised her hand and knocked, the sound was firm yet respectful, carried into the house and absorbed by its walls. She waited, hands resting at her sides, while the morning fully claimed the garden behind her.

Whatever lay beyond the door was no longer abstract. She had crossed the path. She had entered the space between leaving and arriving.

Now, all that remained was to step forward once more.

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About the Creator

Engr Bilal

Writer, dreamer, and storyteller. Sharing stories that explore life, love, and the little moments that shape us. Words are my way of connecting hearts.

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