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Country Lines

A Story Every Day in 2024 June 8th 160/366

By Rachel DeemingPublished 2 years ago 2 min read
Country Lines
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Bob's nephew, Ryan was known round the village as a rascal but he was charming and, finding that there was much about his own life that was charmless, to Bob, Ryan was like a breath of fresh air.

Ryan had a favour. Could Bob help deliver a package?

Bob nodded.

Bob's sister, Maggie had warned him not to help Ryan with any "deliveries" but had not expanded into details. Maggie always had been a moaner; lately, she looked her age, rough and wrinkly, black bags like oversized baggage on her dour face. He didn't have much to do with her. Ryan was the only one of his close family who paid him any attention really.

He'd help him out. He had to go to Bristol anyway.

"He'll meet you the back of Specsavers, Unc."

"Do I need to do anything?" Bob asked.

"No, just hand it over." Ryan smiled at his uncle. "Thanks for doing this. I would post it but...you know how crap that is..."

Bob did. He was still waiting for batteries for his hearing aids.

Ryan hesitated when he handed the package over. "Just...well...thanks," he haltingly said, looking sheepish, like he wanted to say more.

Bob dismissed it. It was good to feel useful.

*

Bob walked around the back of Specsavers, with the package for someone called Blaze. Ryan had described him in very loose terms. But he was the only one there, hooded, fidgety and difficult to see in the dark shadows of the alley.

Bob said a cheery "Hello!" and added, "Are you Blaze?"

Blaze jerked and hissed, "Fuck! Keep your fucking voice down, old man!"

Bob, who couldn't hear much, did make out harsh consonants which produced a sense of foreboding.

He stretched his arm out to hand over the package. Blaze took it.

And that's when the shouting started and the dogs rushed in, barking and snarling and Blaze dropped the package and was shinning up the wall, to Bob's surprise, and Bob was approached by a uniformed woman who he couldn't hear at all over the raid.

Very shortly after this incident, Bob revised his opinion of Ryan and developed a great deal more understanding for Maggie.

***

366 words

I had a conversation at work about old men being used as drug runners off the back of a phone call I took and a colleague explained the concept of "Country Lines", how drugs are brought into cities, presumably because the people doing these runs are not under suspicion and so, are less likely to be watched, making it easier for "product" to be distributed and manufactured? I don't know anything about drugs, I am pleased to say but the discussion did spark the idea for a story.

Thanks for stopping by! If you do read this, please do leave a comment as I love to interact with my readers.

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  • John Cox2 years ago

    Another brilliant slice of life, Rachel! This one has a rather untimely lesson for Bob!

  • Caroline is so right! You weave vivid tales with so few words. Love the conclusion too… character development 😃.

  • Caroline Craven2 years ago

    I dated a horrible guy called Ryan in high school so I knew he was going to be a rotter! Ha! I am always impressed how much story you work into so few words. This was great.

  • D.K. Shepard2 years ago

    A very engaging read! Felt very bad for poor Bob! The only person attentive to him dupes him!!

  • "Maggie always had been a moaner", not me thinking somethings entirely inappropriate as I read that hahahahahha. Also, using clueless old people for things like this is so heartless!

  • Interesting topic. You just never know who might be smuggling drugs. Roll of thumb, never deliver a package to someone in a dark alley. Good story Rachel.

  • Shirley Belk2 years ago

    That's what happens when men don't listen to women...we know things...

  • Andy Potts2 years ago

    When I saw the headline, I wondered what this would be about. Remember reading quite a bit about country lines gangs, mostly on warning notices posted on commuter trains out of London. Back then, they were mostly targeting school kids but I guess tactics change.

  • Ameer Bibi2 years ago

    Much appreciated ☺ I am wondering how beautifully extracting the topics for writing,you people Love t

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