Cold Dream
Liam Storm's challenge
The following story is for Liam Storm's 1984 challenge...
It was a bright cold day in April, and the clocks were striking thirteen.
I was still in bed. My wife had just died the night before and after a horrible night, I had finally fallen asleep. I pondered how vivid my dream was. A man had come up to me and said that he could bring her back, at a price.
I'd seen this scenario before in so many movies. Sell yor firstborn, give me your soul. As soon as a person died, they stayed dead. I would never see my wife again. I looked out the window. The sun was shining brightly, the snow had melted and was giving rise to a new season.
But I only saw grey. The ominous look of grey. Was I depressed and needed help? I barely felt I could leave my room. I missed my wife so much.
We had been married for two years. We had decided no children. Most days were exciting and full of adventure. My wife, Janet, was a nurse and I owned a business. We had several vacations a year. We had planned a trip to Italy in a few months, now the thought of it depressed me.
I went downstairs to have some breakfast. I had no appetite so I just drank some coffee. I couldn't escape the idea that our bodies, our lives would just cease to exist. Everything suddenly seemed meaningless.
We make a routine, wake up, work, pay bills, and keep repeating. Yet we all die sooner or later. I was in this world for just a short time and while with Janet, I was trying to make it a grand old time. I decided to hell with it. I was going to sell my business, relocate and start a new life. There was nothing left here in Canada for me.
Years passed. I had relocated to Rome. Why? Because I had always dreamed of being in the city with the Colosseum. I was working casually to pay off any bills. Everyday though I would go for walks to different parts. It was the only way I could get my mind off my wife. This particular day especially did.
A strange man had told me that I would be reunited with what my heart most desired. He said the tragedy that was to be bestowed on the world was going to fall soon. A nut bag I figured. What could possibly happen right now.
I went to bed and had another dream about the man offering me to bring back my wife. This time the dream was lucid. I was able to respond to him. I told him while I wanted nothing more than to have her back with me I could not sacrifice anything to revive her. This was based both on the fact I didn't trust him, and also a renewed faith having lived in Rome for the past few months.
It was a great thing I did that too. The following day a massive tidal wave consumed most of the world. How it happened, we will never know. As it turns out, everybody had had a similar dream. Many had caved to this man in the dream and they as such were turned away from the gates of Heaven. Here I was holding a key to it. The people who failed the test were not going to get the key. As I approached the gate I saw the familiar beauty that was my darling Janet. We were united at last, not on the Earth but in this eternal after life.
About the Creator
Sid Aaron Hirji
Canadian born man who finds literature and science equally fascinating. Trauma bleeds through generations, words heal the hidden scars.
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Comments (6)
The message that is conveyed is very powerful. Who today has such dignity and such a heart? Here we are talking about the fact that they will sell us like animals in the end. People are starving. They say: you will fight and you will be proud that you will die… A soul that is sold out is a soul that never finds rest
A story that evokes many thoughts in me. The main points of your story touch upon reality and perhaps the future. The suggestion of selling one's soul and the ensuing destruction send multiple messages.🌞
Now that was inspiring, uplifting and insightful. Great story and entry for the challenge
Ouch Sid. Yep, seen enough movies to not fall for that one. Sad, but dead with a happy ending in heaven. Cool ending.
Oh wow, that was a scary test. I'm not sure if I would have passed or failed it. Loved your story!
This was so sad!