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Caveman

Microfiction

By Moon DesertPublished 3 years ago 1 min read
Photo by Alexandros Giannakakis on Unsplash

He entered cavernous concrete cubicle to unleash tenterhooks of the night. It felt like he was preparing for a hunt, scrupulously placing each item to suit his survival mode.

Accidental spider crossing his path couldn’t put him off his stroke.

He knew where he was, where he had been, and where he was going.

Like a prehistoric man, scantily clad but with real tools that pushed the limits. Sponge, soap, shampoo. The darkness of primeval days dispelled by bright lights hanging inside.

After the shower, Viggo was able to carry out his daily routine with the vigour of a teenager.

Short Story

About the Creator

Moon Desert

UK-based

BA in Cultural Studies

Unsplash

Crime Fiction: Love

Poetry: Friend

Psychology: Salvation

Where the wild roses grow full of words...

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