Body Count
The sum of all.
"Tell me, Kevin, how does it feel to be here?" Dr. Martinez calmly asked.
"What kind of question is that? I don't want to be here."
"What about the others. Where's Erick, David, Alicia and Klaus?"
"Why don't you ask, pretty boy. He's the one you should be talking to." Kevin responded while crossing his arms. A grumpy stare solidified.
"Yes, you're right, Kevin. But Craig won’t answer my calls. Do you know where he is?"
"No... he's probably talking to that girl again. I don't like her. She just wants to kiss him all the time."
"There's nothing wrong with that, is it, Kevin? He is a young man with hormones. How old are you?"
"I just turned eleven. I was hoping you had a cool present for me."
"I do, I do have one for you right after we finish here."
Little Kevin became excited and ready to cooperate. The session was nearing diagnosis. The doctor reached for his voice recorder to document his thoughts.
Note: The patient is clearly experiencing multiple personality disorder. I have met everyone except for David. Craig is accurate with his assumption of missing time. Like a strange heist of his fragile mind...
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Lamar Wiggins
Creative writer in the Northeast US who loves the paranormal, mystery, true crime, horror, humor, fantasy and poetry.
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The Gravy Train Gang
"Alright, we know he comes in here every day at three o'clock and opens the bottom left cabinet door next to the fridge. It's three of us and today our goal is to get that box of cheezees. They're so damn delicious! Shadow, you're the biggest. When he opens the cabinet, stand sideways behind him. Buttons, you create a diversion while I-"
By Lamar Wiggins3 years ago in Fiction
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Oh that was a surprise, I didn’t expect that! That was really well written and revealed.
I didn’t comment on this before because my mom has DID, and the consequences of it were severe for me. But I wanted to let you know the prose is good here.
Well done and Congratulations on your Top Story❗😉💯🎉🎉🎉
amazing keep it up
Very innovative! Great job!
nice
nice story
Interesting take on the challenge.
A really thought-provoking read. Well done!
Nice story
A very creative and interesting take on the challenge. Well done!
nice work. amazing
I really like where you went with this one, Lamar! Congratulations on a well-deserved Top Story!
Congratulations on Top Story, Lamar!
Intriguing heist Lamar! Well done. And congratulations 🥇
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Now that reminded me of the story about Billy Milligan and also Shyamalan's 2016 Split movie. Congrats on the top story!
Wow, what a captivating read! Your storytelling skills truly shine in this piece. Kudos to you for crafting such an engaging story! Congrats on Top story!!!💕👏🙌
Good work… thank you
Congratulations on your top story! You earned it! 🎉🎉🎉
Congrats on a wel deserved Top Story! Not surprised this got it, as this was well done within the restrictions! Bravo, sir!
Great twist! Congrats on TS!
Very interesting story Lamar. In such few words you were able to flesh out the details of this disturbed individual. Great job. Congrats on the TS.