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Beneath the Silence

I didn’t realize, then, that such a hush could be a harbinger.

By Pamela WilliamsPublished 10 months ago 2 min read
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Dressed in black, I crouch in the shadows, watching the cabin with a sense of déjà vu. The resistance called for a secret meeting. Peter and I are tasked with relocating homeless children. But our orders do not mention a solitary candle burning in the window.

Peter and I joined the resistance with other teenagers three years ago, our innocent faces masking spies.

Now, crouched in the dark behind trees, peering at the flame, I slide my pistol from the holster, firm and steady. The last time I held this pistol, I was training in precision shooting. A hush had fallen when I hit every target, though I hadn’t realized then it was a harbinger.

Remembering my initial target had been an enemy troop who executed neighbors for hiding resistance fighters; I still see an infant smashed into stone.

I recall the enemy huddled in the cold, surrounded by woods, which hide a labyrinth of beaten paths, one of which leads to this cabin. Francisca, another teenager, and I had approached the group. She waved a scarf, letting it slip from her fingers, a setup. Two enemy troops ran to retrieve the scarf and pushed each other until one snatched it.

I had watched Francisca snuggle against him. As they strolled into the woods, I followed.

Our leader stepped from the shadows and shot him. I never wanted to return to these woods, but here I am, hiding behind trees, watching the flame.

I must find Peter and the children. They may be trapped.

I move toward the cabin, pistol in hand—the back door creeks as I push it open.

My heart feels like a sledgehammer.

A rancid odor of decaying wood fills my nostrils.

A screech: “If you weren’t already dead, I’d kill you.”

Holding my shaking pistol, I pivot toward the voice.

“You should have saved the infant,” it shrieks.

Buckling from a flash image of the infant, I scream, “Show yourself.”

“I’m in front of you.”

I catch sight of the movement of a black goat's head on the mantle. I fire the pistol, but it doesn’t faze the thing.

Mocking laughter lingers.

“Where’s Peter,” I yell.

“Dead, like you.”

“I'm not dead," I scream.

"You've been dead for 80 years and still looking for Peter!"

Its mocking laughter pushes me over the edge. I snatch the goat's head from the mantle, crush it with my boots, and drop to my knees, realizing I will never rest. How can I rest while the children suffer?

A ray of light fills the room, blinding me.

As I lift my head, the cabin fades and is replaced by a towering lady of stone with my name etched into the base and an ornate tablet reads: 'Throughout the occupation during World War II, she risked her life to protect the innocent.'

Justice echoes eternally.

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About the Creator

Pamela Williams

“Suppose I had wings like the dawning day and flew across the ocean. Even then your powerful arm would guide and protect me.”

— Psalm 139:9–10, Contemporary English Version (CEV)

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  • Caitlin Charlton3 months ago

    Ooo that was a chilling twist. From relocating homeless children, to no solitary candles burning in the window. Innocent faces masking spies. 😲 Love the atmosphere building with the flame and the pistol. An infant smashed 😮 Gosh. I love the sense of adventure in this. The rebellion. The saviour energy. 👌🏾 A black goats head 😳 How dear IT say that. Oh my gosh the last part captured my soul. 'the lady of stone'. Outstanding work Pamela 🤗 ❤️

  • Joe O’Connor3 months ago

    Another twist! I like how the pace is sharp and moves quickly, though I did get a bit confused on the flashback. Maybe italics could serve to contrast past vs present? Zinger of a last line.

  • Imola Tóth7 months ago

    What a twist! I've been to a WWII memorial yesterday, and now reading this just hits deeply. It's one of my favorite stories I read this week.

  • Wow this had such tension and intriguing details loved it

  • D.K. Shepard10 months ago

    Woah! So many layers of tension and complexity in such a short piece! And some pretty terrifying and gruesome imagery too. Really compelling piece, Pamela!

  • Oh my, so much trauma. Loved the twist at the end. Hope you've been doing well. I was so happy to see your name in my notifications!

  • ThatWriterWoman10 months ago

    Quite literally - haunting! Nicely done Pamela, I love the reveal at the end!

  • Mother Combs10 months ago

    Such an interesting story. Am I wrong to assume she's a ghost?

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