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Awaiting the Freedom Boat - Part 3

The spared ones

By Rowan Finley Published 10 months ago โ€ข Updated 10 months ago โ€ข 2 min read
Top Story - March 2025
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Author's Note:

If you haven't read the first two parts to this story, please do so in order to gain proper context:

Part 1, written by Rowan Finley:

Part 2, written by Komal:

Part 3, below

Casta's caretaker had a grave expression. She looked a Casta, shaking her head. Closing her eyes for a moment, she reopened them.

"Robert, you must take her back to the dock now."

Robert nodded with silent understanding in his eyes.

"Zero lifeboats."

"Casta, you need to go with Robert and listen to everything he says. He will be your new caretaker!"

The old woman smiled with a sad edge to her smile.

Robert took Casta's hand, saying,

"Come with me. We are going to swim back to the dock. We must escape now!"

"But you need to come with us too..."

Casta started to whimper as she looked with a lovely gaze toward her caretaker that she had gotten very used to over the last couple of years.

"I can't swim with my leg like this..."

She gave Casta a tight hug and a kiss on the forehead. Nodding to Robert, she closed her eyes and took a deep breath.

Discreetly, Robert and Casta slipped into the water and swam as good as they could away from the boat. The water was shockingly cold and felt like ice to their thrashing bodies.

Moments went by but they felt like hours...

Casta's caretaker had a flashback to her grandmother in a rocking chair. Her grandmother's name was Irene Fogel Weiss and she told her the horrors of the holocaust that she'd experienced.

"I should have known better..."

She whispered aloud to herself. There was another scream and a thud on the boat.

Her heartbeat quickened. Every stage of her life flashed through her mind.

"Take good care of her, Robert!"

She breathed into the sea breeze. The two children couldn't be seen because of the blessed mist that hung above the water and she was grateful for that.

"This way!"

One of the shipmates motioned for her to follow him.

Looking down at her limping leg, she quoted Winston Churchill,

" "Those that fail to learn from history are doomed to repeat it." "

Robert gripped the edge of the wooden dock, pulling himself up on the pier, he reached down and pulled Casta up to the dock. Trying to catch their breath, they sat in silence as water droplets dripped down from their bodies. They had made it back to some form of safety.

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About the Creator

Rowan Finley

Father. Academic Advisor. Musician. Writer. My real name is Jesse Balogh.

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  • Narghiza Ergashova7 months ago

    "Excellent work!"

  • AmynotAdams7 months ago

    I subscribed!! I love a great story teller can't wait to see more. Pure talent..can you please lmk what you think of my newest poem plz..I hope to be great like you one day, your story made me feel like I was watching scenes from a movie

  • ๐ŸŽ‰ Congrats on your Top Story! ๐Ÿ“ฐโœจ Super proud of youโ€”so well deserved! ๐Ÿ’ช๐Ÿ‘ Keep shining! ๐ŸŒŸ๐Ÿ˜Š

  • MD.ATIKUR RAHAMAN10 months ago

    Great work

  • Bishnu Kumar 10 months ago

    Superb Narrative Craft - When's the Next Chapter?

  • Well written, congrats ๐Ÿ‘

  • Komal10 months ago

    Ohh, this is gripping! The tension is so well-paced, and very emotional. Are they truly safe, or is there more danger lurking?๐Ÿค”

  • Colleen Walters10 months ago

    I'm rooting for the caretaker too, and her wisdom...

  • Alex H Mittelman 10 months ago

    Very descriptive! Great work

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