AURA THAT HURTS
NEVER THINK OF MAKING YOUR FRIENDS JEALOUS!!
MY EYES teleported to my room. I was in my bed surrounded by my friends and my younger brother. Never in my life did my chest burn , never did I feel like a 100 kg BOULDER dumped inside me, never did my breath smelled like smoke. As my eyes got stable after intense dizziness, I heard my friends talking in a serious tone." You don't get it we need to hid her somewhere". " Yeah of course we need to but we can't take her there. She is still a normal human being .... she won't understand a thing and plus all this is just a accident. "ACCIDENT!!! YOU GOT TO BE KIDDING". " OK fine it's not a accident but how are we can't take her there, NO HUMANS ALLOWED!!". "Don't worry about that, I'll work something out".
Just then a pair of gleaming eyes landed on me. "OH! LOOK SHE'S AWAKE". okay now I was deaf too! "How do you feel?" said Danya my bestfriend. I was about to respond but my tounge pulled back. Only thing that did happen was tears rolling on cheeks. She gave me a concern look and said, " Don't you worry, I'll get that repair in seconds. With that she grabbed my throat in a choking position. I didn't mind, it was better to choke and did rather than living with this pain. I closed my eyes just to find my big tonsils disappearing. I opened my eyes to face her as in to ask how did she do that but she just winked and asked " Now tell me how did you get into this ?" " I literally called you guys a MILLION TIMES!!!. " Well we did text YOU". "I waited near the docking station for like 30 mins but when you guys didn't arrive... I made my way into our favorite picnic spot and I casually started to relax beneath those shady trees. But then I spotted a small orangish rock it was glistening. It's beauty was so mesmerizing that I decided to keep it and show you guys and then make you jealous but just as my palm felt it's texture...it literally started to penetrate inside me . It was like 100 honeybees devouring my soul. I tried to scream but not even a soul heard my voice. Horror struck me when my eyes made their way down. My veins grew bright orange and were trying to make their way out. Just then a violent thunder followed by heavy rain helped me get some relief. It was as if something made it's way out of my soul. I was completely breathless but I managed to grabbed my phone and call you but"..."BUT WHAT?" "BUT TT that rock out of no where stood infront of me... flying in the air and just as I thought of escaping, like a raging bull, it hit me hard just below my throat. I grew numb for a second and then crossed the oblivion. I THOUGHT I WAS DEAD BUT THEN I WAKE UP TO FIND MY FRIENDS TALKING ABOUT SOME WEIRD STUFF."
"Well first things first, you should never try to make your friends jealous. And secondly, Danya you were absolutely correct. Now we need to find a way out." said Mani. " Yeah we need too ASAP!!!" " Do you guys bother to tell me or what?" " SIS you always wanted superpowers, don't you? Well YOU HAVE NOW." he showed my reflection in his camera and said," SEEE!!!" "Beneath my throat was that orangish rock, burning and resting peacefully as it glowed. " Sis , someone else was about to steal it tonight and we were suppose to find it and keep it hidden with us and that is why we got late in picking you up.." "And now if that someone finds you then...you are dead-" "NO SHE IS NOT" said Danya. " I have amazing plan but I need some time. Until then you keep her hidden somewhere in the attic for tonight. "OKAY WHO ARE YOU GUYS AND WHY THE ATTIC?"
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Anwesha
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Very interesting and deep story! ππ