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Ancient Minarets of Afghanistan

Timeless Guardians of History

By Bilal MohammadiPublished 2 months ago 4 min read

The desert wind carried a warm breath across the valley as the last shades of daylight slid behind the rugged mountains of central Afghanistan. In the heart of that vast silence stood the ancient minaret—tall, proud, and unbroken despite the centuries that had passed around it. Villagers called it **“The Silent Watcher.”** But for twelve-year-old **Samir**, it was much more than a monument. It was a mystery waiting to be solved.

Samir had always been curious about old things—coins his grandfather kept, broken pottery discovered after heavy rains, and stories of kings whose names had been carved, erased, and carved again. But nothing fascinated him as deeply as the minaret that towered several miles from his village. Its intricate brick patterns glowed bronze in the sunlight, and at night, the moonlight traced its spiraling calligraphy like silver threads.

Every evening after finishing his chores, Samir would sit on the rooftop of their mud-brick home and stare at the minaret from a distance. His grandmother often found him lost in thought and would smile.

“You watch it like it might speak to you,” she teased one night.

“Maybe it will,” Samir replied softly. “I think it remembers everything.”

His grandmother chuckled. “If stones had tongues, my child, that one would never stop talking.”

One chilly autumn morning, Samir decided he could wait no longer. He wanted to see the minaret up close—not just from rooftops or village paths but from its very shadow. So, just before sunrise, he packed a small cloth bag with bread, cheese, and his sketchbook, and set out alone.

The journey was quiet except for the crunch of gravel under his sandals and the distant songs of birds waking with the dawn. As he walked, sunlight slowly spilled into the valley, revealing the tall structure piece by piece. Each step made the minaret grow larger, grander, and somehow more alive.

By the time Samir reached it, the sun had risen fully. He stood still for several minutes, overwhelmed. Patterns of baked brick curled upward in the shape of vines and stars. Calligraphy spiraled around the tower like a poem written on the sky itself.

He placed his hand gently on the surface. The brick felt warm despite the early hour. “How old are you?” he whispered.

In that moment, the wind swept around the minaret in a sudden circle, almost like an answer. Samir laughed quietly. “I knew you weren’t silent,” he said.

He found a spot in the shade and began sketching. From time to time, he glanced up, trying to capture every curve and line. But as he drew, a shadow fell across his page. He looked up and saw an old man leaning on a wooden staff.

“You sketch well,” the man said. His voice was thin but warm. “Not many children come here alone.”

Samir closed his book shyly. “I wanted to see it for myself.”

The old man nodded, stepping closer to the minaret. “I come here often. This tower is older than many nations. It has seen empires rise and fall. And yet…” He gently tapped the brick. “It stands.”

“Do you know its stories?” Samir asked eagerly.

“I know some,” the man said, sitting down beside him. “But the minaret knows more.”

They both looked up together.

For hours, the old man explained how travelers, scholars, and kings had once passed through this valley. He spoke of architects who carved scripture into the very bones of the tower, and of craftsmen who laid bricks with such precision that even centuries later the patterns remained sharp.

Samir listened with wide eyes. The minaret seemed different now—no longer just a monument, but a witness. A guardian.

“What happened to the people who built it?” Samir asked.

“Time happened,” the old man replied. “War, journeys, new cities… life always moves. But they left this behind so we would not forget them.”

As the sun climbed high, Samir shared half of his lunch with the old man. They ate in silence, listening to the wind brushing against the minaret like soft fingers playing an ancient instrument.

When they finished, the old man stood and dusted off his robe. “I must go back before the heat grows. But remember this, boy: places like this survive only if people remember them.”

Then, to Samir’s surprise, he added, “And perhaps one day, people will remember because of boys like you.”

Before Samir could respond, the old man began walking away, his figure shrinking into the shimmering distance. Samir watched him go, wondering who he was and how he knew so much.

But when he turned back to the minaret, another surprise awaited him.

At the base of the tower, partly hidden by a stone, he noticed a small object. He knelt and lifted it carefully. It was a carved wooden bookmark, decorated with the same swirling pattern that wrapped around the minaret.

Had the old man dropped it? Or had it been waiting there for years?

Either way, Samir slipped it carefully into his sketchbook.

When he returned to the village later that afternoon, dusty and tired, his grandmother rushed toward him.

“Where have you been all day?”

Samir smiled and held up his sketchbook. “Learning from the Silent Watcher.”

His grandmother sighed in relief. “And did it speak to you?”

Samir opened the book to his sketch. The lines of the minaret spiraled across the page with a life he had never captured before.

“Yes,” he replied. “It told me to remember.”

That night, under a moonlit sky, Samir looked again toward the minaret in the distance. It rose above the valley like a storyteller keeping watch over a world that constantly forgot its past.

And for the first time, Samir realized that he, too, had become a guardian—one of the many who would carry the tower’s stories forward.

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Bilal Mohammadi

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