Adjustment Period, Day 4
The Continuing Saga of Dale and the Zombies
Dale was feeling positive. Not only had the Zombie Apocalypse been benign, he had learned a valuable lesson the previous day. While the undead were highly cooperative, they were also very literal. Given the lack of blood flow to their brains, he supposed that was to be expected.
The previous day had been productive. Today, he rose refreshed and ready to continue the restoration of the city. Nearby, his team of workers, having required no sleep, awaited his orders. Dale cheerfully shouted, “Okay, guys, let's move our asses!”
Instantly regretting his words, he sighed, sitting down on his.
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Author's note: This is an episode of an "accidental" series, inspired by comments from readers. You'll find the next episode here. This sequel was inspired by a comment on the original story (linked above) from the very talented Roy Stevens. Do me a favor and go read his work:
Thanks!
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Living in a world full of actual zombies would be terrifying, yet also adventurous. Very cool Dana!
Oh boy, I can only imagine what the dead did in this instance. lol 🤣
🤣🤣🤣 I love the build up to the punchline!
Great tail. 🤣
LOL. I love your sense of humour and world-building ability. This has been a delightful side piece to the whole microfiction explosion. Well done, Dana!
LOL, with the asses bit!! These are a great read. Love the humor!!
This series is so funny. Off to read day 5🤣
LOL! I LOVE THIS SERIES, Dana!
Tell me they didn't twerk!
Amazing Story❤️❗
I read the first sentence and recalled a meme about the 2019–2022 years progression: avoid negative people, avoid positive people, avoid people, a void. Nicely done, even though I'm not a fan of zombie apocalypses☺
The tale continues! Love this work of yours, Dana. I’ll be happy to check back in on Dale and co. any time you feel like writing him.
Hahaha! You did it, awesome! And thanks for the link, Dana, that was a kind gesture which cheered me up. Also, one more time, I'm so pleased for you and your challenge victory for "Luna". Celebrate my friend!
Gives a whole new meaning to the term, literally. 🙃
Lol. This is great. Well done.
hahaha