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A woman scorned

Hell hath no furry like

By K-jayPublished 12 months ago Updated 12 months ago 3 min read

The Echo of Vengeance

Elyse had always known pain. Born into a world that demanded twice as much from her as an African American woman, she wore her strength like armor. But even steel can break, and betrayal had a way of finding the cracks.

The night everything shattered began like any other. She came home late, exhausted but eager to unwind. Daniel’s car in the driveway brought a small smile to her lips. Inside, the house was unnervingly quiet. She called out, only for her voice to echo back unanswered.

Climbing the stairs, she heard whispers—her name, spoken in hushed tones. Her pulse quickened as she pushed the door open a crack. There, tangled in the bed they’d shared for years, were Daniel and her best friend, Marissa.

For a moment, she was frozen, disbelief gripping her tighter than rage. Then, as Daniel’s wide-eyed panic met her gaze, the fury broke through.

“What the hell is this?” she demanded, her voice trembling.

Marissa scrambled for words, for dignity. Daniel stammered apologies that fell flat. Elyse didn’t stay to listen. She stormed out, her heart splintering with every step.

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The Mask She Wore

In the days that followed, Elyse buried herself in her work at the social services office. To her colleagues, she seemed unchanged—poised, composed. But inside, she was unraveling.

At night, the mask slipped. Alone in her apartment, she stared into the mirror, questioning everything. Memories of her grandmother’s wisdom echoed in her mind: “They’ll take from you if you let them. Stand tall, girl. Never let them see you broken.”

She tried to channel that strength, but the betrayal cut deeper than any prejudice or hardship she’d faced. These were her people—the ones who were supposed to protect her. And they’d destroyed her.

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The Truth About Caleb

Seeking solace, she turned to her brother, Caleb. But when she told him what had happened, his silence was damning.

“You knew,” she whispered. “You knew, and you said nothing.”

“I didn’t want to hurt you,” he muttered.

The betrayal hit her like a second wave. “You let me live a lie because it was easier for you.”

For the first time, she felt utterly alone.

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The Shift to Revenge

Her pain morphed into resolve. If they thought she’d simply fade into the background, they were wrong. Elyse’s mind sharpened with clarity: if they wanted to strip her of everything, she’d take everything from them in return.

She started small. At Marissa’s workplace, Elyse anonymously sent falsified documents implicating her in misconduct. Marissa was fired within weeks, her reputation ruined.

Caleb’s gambling addiction became her next weapon. Elyse leaked his debts to his employer, ensuring his dismissal. When a loan shark came knocking, Caleb called Elyse for help. She let the phone ring.

Daniel was the final piece. Elyse compiled evidence of his infidelities, sending it to his boss and colleagues. She reached out to his exes, amplifying every grievance. The perfect image he’d built crumbled under the weight of his lies.

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The Cost of Justice

Each victory brought fleeting satisfaction, but the emptiness in her chest only grew. Late at night, as she sat in her barren apartment, she questioned if she had gone too far. But every time she thought of forgiveness, she remembered the look on Daniel’s face that night, the sound of Marissa’s laugh.

She silenced her doubts.

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The Confrontation

Months later, Elyse summoned them all—Daniel, Marissa, and Caleb. They stood before her, shadows of their former selves.

“You destroyed me,” she said, her voice steady. “So I destroyed you. This is justice.”

Marissa’s tears fell freely. “I know I hurt you, but this... this isn’t you.”

Daniel shook his head. “You think this makes you strong? Look at yourself.”

Caleb’s voice was soft. “I still love you, Elyse. Even now.”

She turned away, unwilling to let their words penetrate the armor she’d built.

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The Wasteland

Now she stood in the desolate expanse, her final act of vengeance complete. The barren landscape echoed her voice, her words carried on the wind.

“I’ve done what needed to be done. They deserved every bit of it. I don’t care if they call me the villain. Better a villain with justice than a victim without a voice.”

Her heart ached, but she refused to regret her actions. The world had taken everything from her, and she had taken it back.

As the wind howled around her, Elyse felt a strange calm. Her revenge was complete. And so was her undoing.

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About the Creator

K-jay


I weave stories from social media,and life, blending critique, fiction, and horror. Inspired by Hamlet, George R.R. Martin, and Stephen King, I craft poetic, layered tales of intrigue and resilience,

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  • L.K. Rolan12 months ago

    This feels very cinematic, I think it would work great on screen! Thank you for sharing ✨

  • Alex H Mittelman 12 months ago

    Great work! Dont mess with women! Fantastic

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