We met in a coffee shop.
Our hands touched when you grabbed your drink. You took a sip. Said it tasted exquisite.
I said I liked your smile.
You said you liked my eyes.
It was love at first sight.
We started seeing each other frequently after that. At the market, the park, the pool, the pub, all your favorite restaurants, your apartment…
One day you came by to tell me it was over. To stop sending gifts and following you. You called me a stalker. A creep. You broke my heart.
So I ate yours. And it tasted exquisite.
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If You Love Me, You'll Do It
I met Jason when I was five years old. I could say that I loved him from the moment I saw him. He was so handsome to me and I felt in awe by his presence. When they introduced him as the new kid in school, I wanted to be his friend right away. I remember it like it was yesterday. I remember his smile and how he didn't seem shy. He appeared confident and ready to learn. I waved at him and said "hello," before anyone else could even say a word. He sat next to me, and I asked him if he wanted to be friends. He looked so happy as he said, "Yes!"
By Sidney Smith (Sid Smith)7 days ago in Fiction
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I was not expecting that ending! Loved it : )
Gave me chills. Loved it!
Wow..sweet revenge
Wow..sweet revenge
What a great ending. I loved everything about this. Wonderful writing. Congrats on the top story.
Safety is an illusion, indeed. Well done 💕
It's cool reading it
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very nicely written.❤🌸
What a twist!! 💗
Bloody hell! 😮 Didn't not see that coming!
😯 Well that escalated Very nicely done!
Interesting
haha, that ending, was brilliant!
My friend Mr. Lectern would like to know how it was prepared....?
Oooh I loved this.
Aphotic, this is legendary. I love how you manipulate words--that last line!!!❤️
Im envisioning the velvet red juices dripping off your chin. Your Diamond black eyes are unblinking as a slight upturn at the corners of your mouth exhibit pleasure. Great story Aphotic. Congratulations 🥇
"Knowing I'm on the street where she lives." Let's face it. She was always going to end up with Professor Higgins, no matter how cold & restrained his feelings.
This is wonderful! Every word matters and takes on a double meaning. “We started seeing each other frequently after that” — perfect example. It was a joy to read once and then again after that. Congrats on TS too! 😁
Oh my gosh. This is absolutely amazing. The twist, the way it comes full circle with the word ‘exquisite’ and the way the title completely changed meaning. Absolutely perfect!
Congratulations on your Top Story💖🎉✨
Wow! Romance! Thriller! Horror! So much happened in so little time. I loved it!
Wow, a zinger ending! I love it! So glad it was Top Story so I could read it. Congratulations!
Yay, congrats on your amazing Top Story!! 🤗❤️ I love this one so much!