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A Little Door to Nowhere: a Microfiction

A Mike Singleton Challenge; a fantasy microfiction

By Ian ReadPublished 2 years ago 1 min read
The doorway from Ch 15 of Prince Caspian by C.S. Lewis

"Ewan!" the girl cried.

"Come on, Sara! You ought to see this!" said the boy.

"Mother's going to kill us if she finds out!"

Ewan smiled, "If... 'sides, I won't tell her a thing if you won't."

"Ewan!"

Sara ran after her older brother as he shambled his way along the hedgerow. Once they reached the crest of the hill, Sara's anger melted into sheer amazement.

Her eyes were wide, "What is that?"

Ewan smirked, "I don't know, I found the crows staring at it yesterday."

Sara's eyes glinted with concern, "We should tell Mum..."

Ewan laughed, "And tell her what, exactly? That there's a little door to nowhere in the field? It's not even a proper door, just posts and a lintel!"

"Still, I don't like it..."

A gleam hit Ewan's eye, "What, you scared of some wood, Princess? Fine, I'll show you there's naught to worry 'bout! Probably just the neighbors having a laugh..."

Ewan stepped through the doorway. He vanished through the other side as though he was passing through a curtain of air and sun.

"Ewan!" Sara cried as she ran in after.

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I am an archaeologist, bookwyrm, and story-teller from New Hampshire.

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  • Rachel Deeming2 years ago

    Really liked this. Leaves you wondering where they end up.

  • Dana Crandell2 years ago

    Exactly as I would picture it happening with two children. Great entry!

  • Test2 years ago

    Nice one!

  • L.C. Schäfer2 years ago

    Perfecto! 😁 It's like the challenge was *made* specifically for this story, and that means you nailed it. Good and hard.

  • Lilly Cooper2 years ago

    I want to know more! Great micro!

  • Oooh where did they go? Lve this

  • Kendall Defoe 2 years ago

    Clever!

  • Lol, I love this! Will there be a part 2?

  • Ashley Lima2 years ago

    Love the open-endedness. Is it Narnia, or is it The Veil? Nice one!

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