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A Heart That Remembers

Beyond Goodbye!!

By KomalPublished 11 months ago 4 min read

The first time Maya saw him, it felt like hearing the faintest echo of a melody she had long forgotten.

She was walking through the hospital garden, the evening air crisp against her skin, when a voice behind her called out—

“You dropped this.”

She turned.

A man stood there, holding out her scarf. His fingers, long and slender, curled around the soft fabric, the twilight casting a warm glow on his skin. He wasn’t breathtaking in the way that turned heads, but there was something about him—something quiet yet magnetic, like a NOTE waiting to be played.

Maya hesitated before stepping forward. As she took the scarf from him, her fingers brushed against his, a fleeting touch, barely there.

And yet, her heart clenched.

She didn’t know WHY.

~~~

It had been a year since Ren died in a car accident.

A year since her world became muted, as if someone had taken a SONG she loved and stripped away all the instruments, leaving only silence.

She still remembered the way his hands moved across the piano keys, effortless, like breathing. The way his presence filled a room with warmth, even in silence. The way he used to press a lingering kiss to her forehead after playing their song, whispering,

"One more time, for you."

Now, her apartment was too quiet. The piano in the corner collected DUST.

And yet, here was this stranger—this man whose presence sent ripples through a past she had buried.

~~~

The second time they met, it was at a café.

She was about to leave when a sound stopped her.

Soft piano notes, drifting through the air like a familiar whisper.

She turned toward the source, her breath catching.

He was sitting at the grand piano tucked away in the corner, fingers brushing the keys with a hesitancy that didn’t match the song’s familiarity.

Ren’s song.

Maya took a step back, her fingers digging into her coat sleeves. It wasn’t perfect—his timing was OFF, and his movements unsure, like someone trying to recall a memory from another lifetime.

But she knew that melody.

And he played it the way Ren did. The same slight pause before the chorus, the same lingering press on the final note, as if reluctant to let go.

A tremor passed through her.

How did he know?

~~~

His name was Jeff.

She learned it when he approached her afterward, a lopsided smile on his lips.

“You were watching,” he said, not accusing, just observant.

“You play WELL,” she murmured, though her voice barely held steady.

He chuckled. “Not really. I only started after my surgery.”

She frowned. “SURGERY?”

“Heart transplant.” He touched his chest lightly, as if reminding himself it was there. “Last year. February 14th.”

Everything inside her froze.

February 14th.

The day Ren died.

Maya struggled to breathe, her lungs suddenly too tight.

Jeff’s brows furrowed. “Are you okay?”

She forced a nod. “Yeah. Just… surprised.”

He looked at her for a long moment, then softly added, “I don’t know why, but when I sit at the piano, my HANDS… they just move. Like they remember something I DON'T.”

Her throat tightened.

She forced herself to smile. But her fingers curled into fists.

Because she knew.

The heart inside him was Ren’s.

~~~

She tried to stay away after that.

But life has a CRUEL way of drawing together what fate has already intertwined.

Their paths kept crossing—at the hospital, at the café, at the bookstore where Ren used to RUN his fingers along the spines of books before choosing one at random.

And every time, she saw it.

The way Jeff’s fingers twitched when he heard MUSIC. The way his eyes lingered on the piano like it was calling to him.

Like something inside HIM remembered.

Like something inside him remembered HER.

It terrified her.

Was she drawn to Jeff ?

Or to the heart that still beat for her?

~~~

One evening, she found herself sitting at the PIANO.

Her apartment was dim, the air thick with memories. She hadn’t touched these keys in a year, but now, she let her fingers hover over them, hesitant.

Then, slowly, she pressed down.

A single note filled the silence.

A presence settled beside her.

She knew, without looking, that it was HIM.

Jeff didn’t say a word. He simply reached out, his fingers pressing the keys next to hers—a quiet harmony.

They sat there, in the hush of the evening, playing a song neither of them had spoken about.

The music wrapped around them, soft yet heavy with the weight of things unsaid.

Finally, he murmured, “You’re afraid.”

Her hands trembled. “I don’t know if I’m drawn to YOU or…”

The heart inside me?” he finished.

Her breath hitched.

His fingers stilled on the keys. “I don’t want you to LOVE me because of him.”

Silence stretched between them.

Then, softer this time, he added, “I just want to be someone you can love.

A sob broke from her lips.

Jeff.

Not Ren.

Jeff.

And yet, as he pressed a final note—holding it like A Promise—she realized something.

It wasn’t just Ren’s heart inside him.

It was his OWN.

For the first time in a year, she let herself feel it all—

NOT to the past.

But to the music still playing.

The grief.

The love.

The ache of what was lost, and the quiet, fragile hope of what could still be found.

A single tear slid down her cheek.

And for the first time, as the song faded into silence, she realized—

Maybe this was what BEYOND GOODBYE felt like.

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About the Creator

Komal

I write poems and stories that hit the feels.

When I’m not lost in my own plots, I’m either daydreaming about the next big idea or just winging life with a grin.

𝕀 𝕙𝕒𝕧𝕖 𝕥𝕙𝕖 ℙ𝕠𝕨𝕖𝕣 𝕥𝕠 𝕞𝕒𝕜𝕖 𝕒𝕟 𝕀𝕄ℙ𝔸ℂ𝕋

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  • Katina Banks11 months ago

    So Beautiful, I love it!!

  • JBaz11 months ago

    I like stories that give me a sense of " there is a higher power out there" A beautifully told tale of lost and found love.

  • Lisa11 months ago

    Whoaaa, this is so heartfelt and lovely!

  • Maryam Batool11 months ago

    Oh girl, this was sooo good. The emotions felt so real, like I was right there feeling everything with them. The way you blended grief, love, and that quiet hope—just beautiful. It wasn’t just a story; it felt like something deep. You nailed it! 💖

  • Kodah11 months ago

    This was soo intriguing! Beautifully done, Komal! 🌟💘

  • Tiffany Gordon11 months ago

    Gorgeous, elegant & thoughtful! Go KoKo Go! 🫶🏾🩷💕

  • Ina Zeneli11 months ago

    So tragic and romantic at the same time. It gave me goosebumps, loved it!

  • Ali Sadeek Ahmed11 months ago

    I like this kind of story

  • Rowan Finley 11 months ago

    Also, if you haven't seen the movie Return to Me, you may like this film.

  • Rowan Finley 11 months ago

    This is very moving and sweet. It brings up all sorts of thoughts and questions about what one would do in her situation. I appreciate how she allowed herself to feel in the end though. Great job! Very emotional for sure. :)

  • Mother Combs11 months ago

    very well written, komal. Really enjoyed reading

  • Amos Glade11 months ago

    Painfully sweet and beutiful.

  • Muhammad Ahtsham11 months ago

    "This isn’t just a story; it’s premium-grade emotional damage. I read it, and my heart played a sad major note." 😭🔥

  • Sean A.11 months ago

    Beautiful and lyrical with perfect notes throughout

  • komal, your writing style is so gentle and evocative. I love how you create such vivid images with simple, touching prose. This story has a timeless, lyrical quality, similar to Nicholas Sparks' ability to weave emotion into every line. This story deeply moving. You did a beautiful job with it.

  • Rachel Deeming11 months ago

    This was romance full hilt. You've tagged it humor though. Did I miss something?

  • Gosh, I don't know what I'd do if I was Maya, to realise that it's Ren's heart inside Jeff. Loved your story!

  • Marie381Uk 11 months ago

    So very beautiful ⭐️💕⭐️

  • The sweetest deja vu, I'd say. This one really sets the tone for the month of love, Komal. Well done.

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