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A Friar's Secret.

A Solitude of lies. Craft

By Antoni De'LeonPublished about 12 hours ago 5 min read

Beneath the crumbling stones of an ancient convent lies a chamber the church had conveniently forgotten...sealed behind walls of prayer and silence. For many years it existed, quietly gathering cobwebs and keeping its secrets. But one soul had rediscovered this vault of treasure, this place which had once been transformed into a lair of pilfered opulence - an intoxicating blend of sanctity and decadence.

Golden chandeliers dripped with crystal stories, their glow softened by candlelight flickering in niches carved from the original stone. Shadows dance across frescoes of saints, now overlaid with gilded serpents and celestial motifs.

The air is heavy with incense and aged wine, carrying remnants of old chants mingled with the perfume of natural rocks and stones.

The convent’s austere stone arches remain, but they are veiled in drapes of something sinister. The flooring is black marble veined with silver, once polished to a mirror sheen, reflecting the grandeur above.

There are hidden passages and a spiral staircase concealed behind a carved confessional, which leads deeper into vaults where relics and treasures still lie...waiting for the one brave enough to venture into its history of bloodshed and theft.

For many years, Friar Girolamo, though not actually confined to the life of a monk, had lived a personally cloistered contemplative life within the walls of the Convent of St. Benedictine. The impressive structure hovered precariously above the forgotten room. Girolamo was a mendicant member of the religious order who lived and worked among the general public in active service, such as preaching, teaching and caring for the poor. The friar was not strictly separated from the world, like monks are - he was more integrated into society.

This freedom allowed him to get up to any mischief which his heart desired, as long as he was discreet about it.

The Friar had long sold his soul to the devil. He pondered his final fate as he sat in his favorite chair in the opulently decorated secret lair, ruminating upon his many sins. He had administered the holy sacraments to the creator unto himself. Fernando could not risk trusting the information he held in his head to be heard by another living soul.

A Catholic priest, when helping someone deal with guilt - especially guilt tied to sin - would typically offer both spiritual guidance and sacramental support.

Sacramental Advice is The Path of Reconciliation. Going to Confession - This is the cornerstone of Catholic healing from guilt. The priest would encourage you to - Examine your conscience. Confess your sins sincerely. Receive absolution. Perform the assigned penance, or Spiritual Exercises.

The priest had said many prayers...Many Hail Mary's, Our Fathers, and tried to do Acts of Contrition. Scripture Reflection: Reading and meditating on passages like Psalm 51 (“Have mercy on me, O God…”). Acts of Charity - Doing something kind or sacrificial to restore spiritual balance.

Yet, nothing had helped him feel better or salved his conscience. Not even the bloody act of self-flagellation had helped, not even when blood seeped from his back, or from the depths of his wounded soul.

Hidden Objects of Faith and Doubt existed here.

• A cracked chalice once used in clandestine midnight masses, its rim stained with wine that feels more like blood.

• An illuminated manuscript with marginalia that questions the very doctrines it copies, written in a trembling hand.

• A reliquary of false bones, perhaps animal remains passed off as saintly relics, concealed to protect the Friar’s reputation.

Forbidden Knowledge - Scrolls of alchemical diagrams blending scripture with symbols of transformation—half prayer, half spell.

• A diary of confessions where the Friar recorded not the sins of others, but his own unspoken doubts.

• A map of the convent grounds marked with secret tunnels and gardens long since buried under stone.

Objects of Mystery and Contradiction - A raven feather sealed in wax, symbol of exile or temptation, hidden like a guilty talisman.

• A mirror covered in cloth, said to show not the face but the soul’s corruption when unveiled.

• A rosary carved from bone, each bead whispering a forgotten name when touched.

Emotional Relics - Letters never sent, written to family or a lost love, folded and tied with faded ribbon.

• A child’s toy, perhaps a carved wooden horse, hinting at a secret lineage or memory the Friar could never confess.

A candle that never burns out, left as a vigil for someone who never returned.

This room could feel less like storage and more like a psychological reliquary—a place where faith, guilt, and longing are preserved in objects that blur the line between sacred and profane.

Symbolic Floor Plan: The Cloister of the Veiled Mirror

Orientation

• Shape: Octagonal chamber, echoing sacred geometry.

• Centerpiece: The Veiled Mirror, draped in heavy cloth, stands on a raised dais of cracked obsidian.

• Lighting: Flickering candlelight from wrought iron sconces, casting elongated shadows like reaching hands.

symbolic floor plan, rendered in dark opulence and emotional resonance. The room is no longer just a space—it’s a ritual of memory, a constellation of corruption and longing.

Architectural Details

• Walls: Dark wood paneling beneath faded frescoes of saints with obscured faces.

• Ceiling: Vaulted, with gilded ribs and a central medallion depicting a blindfolded angel.

• Floor: Black and crimson tiles spiral inward toward the mirror, forming a labyrinthine path.

• Doorway: Arched, with iron hinges and a lock that turns only from the inside.

This room is a psychological reliquary, each relic a star in a constellation of memory. The mirror remains veiled—not to protect the viewer, but to preserve the illusion that corruption can be hidden.

His humble living quarters belied his true intent

Furniture upholstered in brocade, tables inlaid with gold filigree, and shelves lined with forbidden tomes bound in leather and iron added to the mystique.

Dust laden art, stolen icons and relics reimagined - chalices overflowing with jewels, crucifixes entwined with serpentine motifs, mosaics depicting angels with raven wings were displayed everywhere.

The Centerpiece was a vast mosaic on the ceiling, depicting a cosmic battle between light and shadow, shimmering with lapis lazuli and mother-of-pearl.

It is a place where reverence and rebellion coexist. The sanctity of the monastery lingers like a ghost, but the lair pulses with indulgence, secrecy, and power. It feels both sacred and profane - an altar to hidden desires, a throne room for a ruler of shadows.

Psychological

About the Creator

Antoni De'Leon

Everything has its wonders, even darkness and silence, and I learn, whatever state I may be in, therein to be content. (Helen Keller).

Tiffany, Dhar, JBaz, Rommie, Grz, Paul, Mike, Sid, NA, Michelle L, Caitlin, Sarah P. List unfinished.

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