A Family Affair
A Flash Fiction

It was another dreary day of drizzle, but Thomas Milford didn’t mind. He slogged through the final few yards of mud to the big house’s kitchen door. After giving the knocker a few good clangs he glanced out at the green fields of the estate. He could just make out the shape of the farmhouse that he and his brothers called home.
Suddenly the door swung open and a flustered kitchen maid scowled at him.
“Delivery of eggs,” Thomas said as he held out a cloth covered basket.
She took the basket from him and then quickly shut the door.
Thomas stuffed his hands in his pockets and ambled around the corner and ducked into the carriage house. When he reached the final stall on the right he slid the latch and slipped inside.
“You’re late,” announced a raven haired beauty stroking a mare.
“I beg your pardon, my lady,” Thomas said with a smile.
“You are forgiven,” she declared as she took his hand in hers. “But you better not keep me waiting tonight, I don’t think my heart could take it.”
“I promise I will be here,” Thomas assured her. “And then no more secret meetings. We’ll go to London, or New York, or any other city we decide to make our own. Does that sound agreeable, Lady Charlotte?”
“Indeed, it does,” she replied with a grin. “Alright, I must go, before I’m missed.” She squeezed his hand and then darted through the stall gate.
***
As the sun set Thomas paused at the door to the bedroom he shared with his brothers. Could he really leave his life behind? Was he being a fool? Maybe so, but he had chosen Charlotte and she had chosen him. He’d left a note for his brothers who were out at the pub and had said farewell to the two adjacent headstones in the church cemetery. He was ready.
He walked into the kitchen and halted immediately. The Dowager Countess of Chatterley, Charlotte’s grandmother, was sitting at the table with a polished wooden box before her. The sight of such a regal woman in his humble home was a bizarre sight.
“Good evening, Thomas,” the elderly woman said. “Please, sit.”
“To what do I owe the pleasure, my lady?” Thomas asked in a shaky voice as he lowered himself into the chair across from her..
“I’ve come to bring you a gift.”
“Me?”
“Yes, you.”
“But before the gift,” she gestured to the box. “I must tell you a story.”
Thomas stared at her blankly.
“During the Boer War, Chatterley House entertained a number of military officials. One such guest was Lieutenant Briggins, a very charming and handsome young man. My daughter, Evelyn, who you’ll know as Lady Chatterley, became quite smitten with the gentleman.”
Thomas remembered Lady Chatterley, Charlotte’s mother, quite fondly. She’d always been a charitable volunteer at the town school he attended and had even visited the tenant farms from time to time.
“Well, my Evelyn and Lieutenant Briggins made plans to marry. But Briggins was called away and he died in South Africa. A year later Evelyn was married to her distant cousin, who inherited the title Lord Chatterley.”
“Why are you telling me this, my lady?” Thomas interjected. “Is this supposed to be some kind of warning?”
The Dowager Countess stared at him. There was nothing menacing in her gaze, but something like pity.
“I know that you have intentions with Lady Charlotte,” she declared. “And I am here to tell you that you can not proceed with your plans, but not for the reason you might expect. I’ve told you about my daughter and Lieutenant Briggins because they are your parents.”
Thomas’s jaw went slack. Impossible.
“We kept Evelyn’s pregnancy a secret from everyone. She didn’t want to relinquish you but finally conceded to placing you in the Milfords’ custody where she could watch you grow up from afar. And this is why you can’t marry Charlotte. She’s your half-sister”
Thomas shook his head. “Why should I believe you? There’s no one who can confirm what you’ve told me. Lady Chatterley succumbed to the Spanish influenza just as my parents did.”
The dowager pushed the box in front of him.
“Open it,” she directed.
Thomas didn’t want to. He didn’t want her story to be true. But if it was, it changed everything. He gingerly lifted the lid.
Inside was a birth record for a Thomas Briggins son of Charles Briggins and Evelyn Chatterley who was born on March 12, 1902. His birthday. And beneath the piece of paper were stacks of money.
“Your mother regretted that she couldn’t raise you and give you a life of nobility, but she wanted to give you something she never felt she had. Freedom.”
Thomas stared at the small fortune and the birth record, seeing but still not believing. How could this be?
“You have enough to make a fresh start somewhere. But it must be without Charlotte.”
“Will you tell her the truth? Will she understand why we can’t be together?”
“I’m afraid she can’t. Your parentage must remain a secret until Lord Chatterley dies. If doubt is cast on Evelyn’s fidelity he may disinherit her children. You wouldn’t want that for Charlotte, would you?”
Thomas shook his head, “No.”
“But someday, maybe when you’re both as old as I am, you can tell her the truth. Tonight she will lose a dream of romance, but one day she may gain back her brother.”
Thomas nodded as he stood.
“I wish you good fortune, lad. My Evelyn was not the only one who watched you grow up with pride.”
Thomas looked into the dowager’s eyes. They were brimming with tears.
He took her wrinkled hand in his and kissed it. This wasn’t the way he imagined leaving. Instead of a heart soaring with the hope of a life with Charlotte it was heavy with the weight of old secrets and the promise he was about to break.
Author’s Note: This was written for the Heart 2025 Flash Fiction Writing Battle.
About the Creator
D.K. Shepard
Character Crafter, Witty Banter Enthusiast, World Builder, Unpublished novelist...for now
Fantasy is where I thrive, but I like to experiment with genres for my short stories. Currently employed as a teacher in Louisville.
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Comments (24)
What a horrible discovery! I feel terrible for Charlotte. Congratulations on Top Story. 😊
Congrats on Top Story! 🎉 Well deserved. Keep up the good work!
I enjoyed reading this exciting piece. Captivating.
very awesome work: I am very inspired by your work
Great twist, D.K.! As always, you tell a wonderful story in such a short piece. No surprise that it made it through so many rounds of the writing battle and made Top Story! Congrats! 🎉
The thing that makes this story top notch is having it told by such a fabulous storyteller. Congrats on your top story
This is so very well told, we knew there had to be a secret if some kind when a pauper wishes to interact with the rich But that he is loved and not abandoned is a nice twist even though it must remain a secret
Oh my! you knocked this out the park, pal! As soon as I figured out what was going on you delivered the twist so well! there is impressive depth to this short piece-the literary and historical references all felt smooth and unforced and the dialogue was exceptional! congrats on your placement in WB and for the Top Story!
Blimey! Nicely done, D.K.
What a twist! I was not expecting that at all! This is a such a good story! I hope Thomas and Charlotte do get speak again so Charlotte can learn the truth.
Well done! Ready to be the next downton abbey
Very nice read
Back to say congratulations on your Top Story! 🎉💖🎊🎉💖🎊
A clever and provocative improvisation upon D.H. Lawrence's ageless work, DK!
Ooooo this is good DK!! It might fit into the shockwave challenge too?? Congrats on Top Story, by the way!!
Well written, congrats 👏
Hell ya glad to see this make top story!
Well done - so happy to see this is today's top story!
Intriguing tale & excellent incorporation of the prompts ✅😊.
This is so impressive, DK! And your story made it through six rounds ! Great storytelling and congratulations!
An excellent entry and congrats on 6 wins! How did you like the new format?
My heart broke so much for both Thomas and Charlotte. Thomas because of the truth he found out and Charlotte because of the truth she wouldn't find out for now. Your story made me so emotional and I freaking loved it!
Oh damn DK. This was such a heartbreaking ending. Really clever storytelling and your characters were so believable. I hope you placed with this. I think it’s fantastic.
Such a beautiful story. I both love and hate the ending. Well done.