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A Drunkard Girl

Friendship and Transformation

By solandoPublished 3 years ago 3 min read

I met her at a local bar, sitting at the counter, her head resting on her arms. She looked young, maybe in her early twenties, with long, tangled hair and smudged eyeliner. I didn't think much of it at the time, assuming she was just another patron having a bad day.

But as the night wore on, it became apparent that she was more than just a little drunk. She slurred her words, swayed on her stool, and spilled her drink on the counter. The bartender gave her a stern warning, but she just giggled and ordered another round.

As I watched her, I couldn't help but feel a sense of sadness. It was clear that she was struggling with something, maybe a personal issue or addiction. I wondered what had brought her to this point in her life, and whether there was anything I could do to help.

After a while, she stumbled off her stool and made her way to the door, swaying with each step. I followed her out, concerned for her well-being. She leaned against the wall, struggling to light a cigarette. I offered to help, and we struck up a conversation.

Her name was Emily, and she was just nineteen. She told me that she had dropped out of college and was working at a dead-end job she hated. She had no direction in life and felt lost and alone. She used alcohol to numb her pain, but it only made things worse.

As we talked, I could see the pain and despair in her eyes. It was heartbreaking to see someone so young and full of potential drowning in their own misery. I knew I had to do something to help her.

I suggested that we go for a walk, and she agreed. We strolled through the quiet streets, talking about our lives and dreams. I shared my own struggles with her, and she listened attentively. It felt good to have someone to talk to, someone who understood.

We eventually made our way to a park, where we sat on a bench overlooking a lake. The stars were out, and the night was peaceful. Emily was quiet for a while, lost in her own thoughts. Then she spoke, her voice barely above a whisper.

"I don't want to be like this forever," she said. "I want to be happy, and successful, and loved."

I looked at her and saw a glimmer of hope in her eyes. It was a small spark, but it was there. I knew that I had to do everything I could to help her fan that flame and turn it into a roaring fire.

Over the next few weeks, I spent time with Emily, helping her get her life back on track. We talked about her goals and dreams, and I encouraged her to pursue them. We went to support group meetings together, and I introduced her to new friends who could help her along the way.

It wasn't easy, and there were setbacks along the way. But Emily was determined to turn her life around, and I was determined to help her. Slowly but surely, she began to make progress. She got a new job, enrolled in classes at a community college, and started to build a network of support.

Today, Emily is a different person than the girl I met at the bar that night. She's happy, confident, and full of hope for the future. She's still working hard to achieve her goals, but she knows that she's not alone.

As for me, I'm grateful for the chance to help someone in need. It wasn't always easy, but it was worth it. Seeing Emily grow and change was one of the most rewarding experiences of my life, and I know that I'll never forget her.

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