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A Dance in the Rain

With every step together, under an oak tree on a cold, rainy evening, the magic of the moment deepens their and-together love. A spontaneous adventure turns into an invaluable treasure of memories that make them recollect every time it rains, the fun and connective times they have with one another.

By Hashimoto TashisPublished about a year ago 3 min read
A Dance in the Rain
Photo by Morgan Sessions on Unsplash

There was this young couple, Sarah and Jake. They had been dating for a few months and were so into each other. One evening, with rain pouring down, they decided to walk in the park. The sky was gray, and the air was thick with the smell of rain, but for them, that setting just seemed perfect for an adventure.

They were walking hand in hand when suddenly the rain started coming down in sheets, turning the park into a world of twinkling water. They ran, laughing, for the shelter of a huge oak tree. Its solid branches gave them some respite, but soon they were laughing at the absurdity of it all. "No umbrella? Typical us," said Sarah, shaking her head with a smile.

Not an iota of annoyance in them, they just smiled, and there it was: the rain dancing on the leaves above. The rhythmic sound of the droplets against the ground was almost musical. Jake was always spontaneous, and looking at Sarah, his eyes sparkled with playfulness.

Feeling adventurous?" he asked as a playful grin spread across his face.

Adventurous? In this weather?" Sarah laughed, an eyebrow cocked.

He leaned in closer, pulling her near. "Just trust me.

With that, he suddenly lifted her hand, and she knew they were in the rain dancing. At first, Sarah hesitated, her feet stuck on the ground, but Jake's energy was unstoppable. She laughed, and the worries vanished, going with him, twirling into the downpour.

They swung and swayed to the rhythm of the raindrops, lost in their little world. The cascading rain around them had every drop glistening like diamonds under the streetlights nearby. The sound of the rain created a soothing melody that wrapped them in their arms, and for a few moments, it felt like the time factor had come to a complete standstill.

Free-spirited dancing, their laughter mingling with the sound of the storm, it was as though the universe had conspired to bring about this perfect moment alone for them.

As they danced, the tension and stress of life just melted away. Jake pulled her close, his body warm against hers, even while the rain drenched them. They looked into each other playfully- their hearts racing with the adventure that came along unexpectedly. With every spin, every twirl, they were drawing closer and closer to each other, their bond forged unspoken.

"Look at us!" Sarah laughed, her hair plastered to her forehead, her cheeks flushed joyfully.

"And I wouldn't have it any other way," Jake said with sparkling eyes. "This is what life is about-embracing the chaos!

Finally, the rain began to let up, from downpour to fine spray, gradually. They were standing together under the oak tree, catching their breath. Their laughter was still echoing through the dissipating storm. The world was quiet, still, as if it were only the two of them that remained in the universe.

They strolled towards home, still holding hands but now Sarah couldn't help but dwell on the beauty of it all-evening. Drenched to their bones, their hearts were warm and so full of love. The coldness of the rain meant nothing and only deepened the feeling of warmth that came with being in each other's company.

They found themselves once again back at Sarah's apartment later that night, still laughing with one another. Cuddling up on the couch, a soft blanket wrapped itself deep inside it like in a cocoon. Jake softly tucked the loose strand of hair behind Sarah's ear; his fingers lingered on her cheek. "I'm so glad we went for that walk," Sarah said, her voice softening as she peered into Jake's eyes. "Thank you for the dance in the rain. It was so romantic."

Jake leaned into her then, smiling, and pressed a kiss to her forehead. "I will, too, always. It's times like this that remind us of why we fell in love in the first place.

And from that day on, every time the rain arrived, there Sarah and Jake would be, never to forget how they danced in the rain-the laughter, the spontaneity, and most of all, the love that drew them even closer. Every rainy day was a reminder of that magical evening, one moment always etched in their hearts. Years later, on a rainy day, as they were together standing in the rain, Sarah turned to Jake and laughed, "Shall we?" Always," Jake said, pulling her close as the rain started again. And in that instant, they knew where life would take them to their graves-they would always dance through the storms together.

AdventureFan FictionFantasyLoveMysteryPsychologicalShort StoryYoung AdultSatire

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Hashimoto Tashis

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