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A Candle in the Blizzard

A Short Christmas Story

By Thomas VasasPublished about a year ago 6 min read

The storm arrived earlier than expected. By midday, the snow was falling in thick sheets, a relentless onslaught that obscured the world outside. Winds howled through the small town of Stillwater, rattling windows and sending icy drafts creeping under doors. Roads were impassable, stores were shuttered, and the town square—normally bustling with last-minute holiday shoppers—was eerily silent.

In the modest home at the edge of town, Ellie Carter stood by the kitchen window, staring out into the swirling whiteness. The soft glow of Christmas lights on her porch cast faint halos in the storm, but beyond that, there was nothing but snow. She sighed, wrapping her cardigan tighter around her.

This wasn’t how she had planned to spend Christmas Eve. She had imagined sitting by the fire with her father, exchanging stories and sipping hot cocoa while the snow fell gently outside. But a sudden business trip had taken her father away, leaving Ellie to weather the storm alone.

As the hours dragged on, Ellie busied herself with little tasks—rearranging ornaments on the tree, wrapping the last of the presents, and flipping through old photo albums. The power flickered ominously a few times before finally giving out, plunging the house into darkness. Ellie groaned, lighting a few candles and cursing the storm under her breath.

By evening, the wind’s wail had grown louder, a haunting sound that seemed to echo through the walls. Ellie sat curled on the couch, a blanket draped over her shoulders. The candles she had lit cast a warm, flickering light, but the house still felt cold and lonely.

A sudden knock at the door made her jump. She froze, heart pounding. Who would be out in this weather?

The knock came again, more urgent this time. Grabbing a flashlight, Ellie made her way to the door and hesitated before opening it a crack.

A man stood on her porch, his face pale and wind-chapped, snow clinging to his coat and hair. He looked to be in his late twenties, with sharp features and tired eyes that held a glint of desperation.

“Please,” he said, his voice hoarse. “I need help.”

Ellie’s first instinct was caution—she didn’t know this man, and the storm made everything feel surreal and uncertain. But the genuine plea in his voice softened her defenses.

“Come in,” she said, stepping aside.

The man stumbled in, shaking off the snow and clutching a small bundle to his chest. As he unwrapped the blanket, Ellie realized with a start that it wasn’t a bundle—it was a child. A little girl, no more than five years old, her cheeks red from the cold.

“Her name’s Lily,” the man said, his voice trembling. “We… we got caught in the storm. The car broke down, and we’ve been walking for hours.”

Ellie quickly closed the door against the cold. “Set her down by the fire,” she said, leading him to the living room. The fireplace was still warm, though the flames had dwindled. Ellie added another log and turned back to the pair.

“Are you, her father?” she asked.

The man hesitated before nodding. “Yes. I’m Adam.”

Ellie frowned but didn’t press further. The important thing was getting them warm. She fetched blankets and a mug of hot tea, which Adam accepted gratefully. Lily remained quiet, her eyes wide as she stared at the Christmas tree.

“She hasn’t said much,” Adam explained. “She’s scared. And cold.”

Ellie crouched beside the little girl, offering a gentle smile. “Hi, Lily. I’m Ellie. You are safe now, okay?”

Lily nodded slowly, her tiny hands clutching the blanket Ellie had draped around her.

As the evening wore on, Adam told Ellie bits and pieces of their story. They had been traveling to a nearby town when the storm hit, forcing them to take a detour. The car had skidded off the road into a ditch, and with no way to call for help, they had set out on foot, hoping to find shelter.

“You’re lucky you found this place,” Ellie said. “There’s not much out here.”

Adam nodded. “I know. I saw the lights from the road—barely. It was a miracle we made it.”

Ellie glanced at the candles glowing softly around the room. She had lit them more out of necessity than anything else, but now she wondered if they had been some kind of beacon.

As the clock ticked toward midnight, the storm showed no signs of letting up. The wind screamed outside, rattling the shutters and piling snow higher against the door. Ellie offered the spare bedroom to Adam and Lily, but Adam insisted on sleeping by the fire, keeping Lily close.

“I don’t want to inconvenience you more than I already have,” he said.

Ellie shook her head. “It is no inconvenience. I am glad I can help.”

In the middle of the night, Ellie woke to a strange sound. At first, she thought it was the wind, but then she realized it was something else—Lily, softly crying. Slipping out of bed, Ellie grabbed her flashlight and made her way to the living room.

Adam was sound asleep on the couch, his arm draped protectively over Lily, but the little girl’s eyes were open, tears streaming down her face.

“Lily?” Ellie whispered, kneeling beside her. “What’s wrong?”

Lily sniffled, clutching her blanket tighter. “I miss my mommy.”

Ellie’s heart ached. She smoothed back Lily’s hair and spoke gently. “Where’s your mommy, sweetheart?”

“She’s… she’s in heaven,” Lily said, her voice barely audible.

Ellie felt a lump rise in her throat. “I’m so sorry.”

Lily wiped her eyes and looked at Ellie. “Do you think she can see me?”

Ellie hesitated, then nodded. “I think she can. And I think she would be very proud of how brave you are.”

Lily managed a small smile, and Ellie stayed with her until she fell asleep again. As Ellie returned to her own bed, she couldn’t stop thinking about the little girl’s quiet sorrow and the weight Adam must be carrying.

By morning, the storm had finally passed, leaving behind a world blanketed in pristine white. The power was still out, but the sun shone brightly, and the air had a sense of stillness and peace. Ellie brewed coffee on the old wood stove and served Adam and Lily a simple breakfast of toast and jam.

“We should head into town,” Adam said as they ate. “I need to figure out how to get the car out of that ditch.”

“You won’t get far without help,” Ellie said. “Let me call Greg—he’s the local handyman. He will know what to do.”

Using an old battery-powered phone, Ellie managed to get through to Greg, who promised to come by with his snowplow and tools. In the meantime, Ellie bundled up and took Lily outside to build a snowman. The little girl’s laughter was infectious, and for the first time, Ellie saw a glimpse of the carefree child she must have been before the storm.

Adam watched from the porch, a faint smile on his face. When Ellie returned inside with Lily, he stood and said, “Thank you. For everything.”

Ellie shrugged. “You do not have to thank me. It is Christmas. Helping each other is what we’re supposed to do.”

Adam’s expression softened. “Not everyone would have opened their door to strangers. You didn’t have to, but you did.”

Ellie met his gaze and saw the sincerity there. “You’re welcome,” she said simply.

By afternoon, Greg had arrived to help with the car. After much effort, they managed to tow it out of the ditch and get it running again. Adam and Lily packed up their things, preparing to continue their journey.

Before they left, Ellie handed Lily a small gift—a candle in a jar, painted with tiny snowflakes. “To remember the night the storm brought us together,” she said.

Lily hugged her tightly. “Thank you, Ellie.”

Adam extended his hand. “If you’re ever in Willow Creek, look me up. I owe you one.”

Ellie smiled. “Take care of each other.”

As the car disappeared down the snowy road, Ellie stood on the porch, watching until it was out of sight. The storm had passed, but the warmth it had brought to her home lingered. For the first time in years, Ellie felt truly connected—to her town, to the spirit of Christmas, and to the strangers who had become friends.

That evening, as she lit the candles once more, Ellie sat by the fire and thought about how fragile and fleeting life could be, but also how beautiful. The storm had been fierce and frightening, but it had brought light into her life—just as a single candle can pierce the darkness.

And for that, she was grateful.

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  • Scott A. Geseabout a year ago

    Our world has gone through many changes since I was a kid. This story reminds me of how we cared for and about each other once upon a time. It was year round. Not just when disaster strikes or the holidays come around. We need to find our way back to that. Nice story.

  • Snarky Lisaabout a year ago

    Well written for the season!

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