#8 Scrape's Fate...
~~New YA Fiction~~
Squire "Ski" Reynolds still couldn't believe his eyes. His cellphone news feed just revealed that Scrape Norwood had been gunned down by a SWAT team member and subsequently lost his left leg during a shootout with police yesterday morning while attempting to rob Ganola Bank, the only Black-owned bank in the State of Washington, at gunpoint. Two members of Scrape's crew had also participated in the foiled heist.
Ski also learned that Scrape Norwood's real name was actually O'Pharaoh Serpentine and that he was wanted for kidnapping in the state of Rhode Island. Apparently Scrape had kidnapped his fifteen-year-old son, O'Ryan Fletching, from the child's mother nine months prior and had given him the alias Toby Norwood once the two fled to the state of Washington.
Ski's hands immediately began to tremble in shock at the revelations. Since he exited the womb, Ski had always been a bit of a people pleaser; therefore, he had almost ridden along with Scrape on his unknown "secret" mission the day before so that he wouldn't disappoint him, but Mr. Neddie's warning to return to the right path was permanently cemented in his mental. And the longer that Ski meditated on Mr. Neddie's warning, the stronger the urge to remain in his dorm room became. Ski also felt like two imaginary hands were holding his shoulders down on each side to prevent him from leaving his futon bed.
In hindsight Ski was elated that he had heeded Mr. Neddie's warning. He could have easily gotten caught up in the crossfire and been taken out of the game of life indefinitely.
Once Ski's grandfather, Paw Paw Reynolds, caught wind of Scrape's fate, he said, "Squire I'm not surprised that things ended badly for Scrape. I never liked that man-boy. It was something about his beady eyes. They always had a darkness to them. Also, he had that diamond cross etched in his front tooth and quoted scripture from time to time around me, but as the holy scripture Jude Chapter 1 verse 12 mentions, Scrape is what the scripture calls "a cloud without water," essentially a self-professed man of God with no true spiritual fruit to show for it with all of the bank robbing, kidnapping, steroid-dealing, and, as Mr. Neddie mentioned, adultery that he was committing. And that boy's real last name is Serpentine. That ought to tell you something, Ski."
Ski chuckled to himself at his grandfather's assessment of Scrape, but he had to admit that Paw Paw had pinned the tail on the donkey/hit the nail on the head with regard to Scrape's character.
Since God had given him a second chance, Ski was determined to start pouring into others again. His new pet squirrel, named Agile Ninja Turtle, aka A.N.T., really, really needed his assistance right now. A.N.T. was unable to eat on his right side because he had a really bad abscessed tooth that needed immediate repair, and Ski was determined to pay for the vet bill with his savings.
Ski was beginning to feed his spirit again as well. In fact, an unusual meeting with a mysterious stranger named Mr. Neddie while he was in a rehab hospital for a steroid addiction led Ski to begin reading his Bible again.
In addition to Mr. Neddie's visit, Ski was also inspired to return to reading his holy word again by a story that his grandfather, Paw Paw Reynolds, recently told Ski about his great-grandma Henrietta Brooks from his mother's side, who was Ski's mom Betsey's grandmother.
Apparently, Great Grandma Brooks never learned to read, but the moment that she picked up the Bible, she was able to read it. This miraculous event led to a spiritual revival in Paw Paw's hometown when he was a child, ultimately leading 900 unbelievers to come to Christ.
Life was finally beginning to feel normal for Ski again. He recently began seeing a grief counselor for unresolved PTSD relating to the survivor's guilt that he had been carrying in his heart for 7 years because he had been in that fateful drunk-driving-related car wreck with his parents, yet they both perished and he had survived the accident unscathed. It felt good for Ski to finally unpack his emotions instead of pretending that they didn't exist, like he had been up to that point in his life.
Ski's brotherhood with his best friend Ahanu "Nu" Kind Heart was also on the up and up after Ski apologized to Ahanu for his callousness toward him when Ahanu came to visit him in the hospital. Ski went on to explain that his grief from his parents' fatal car wreck, his embarrassment about his addiction, and his roid-fueled anger made him act a donkey that day.
Not one to nurse grudges, Ahanu forgave Ski immediately and assured Ski that he knew it had been the roids talking all along.
Ski was grateful to have his 'Native Brother From Another Missus' in his life again. He couldn't wait for his pet squirrel Agile Ninja Turtle to meet his Uncle Nu. Ski knew with every fiber of his being that they were going to hit it off beautifully.
About the Creator
Tiffany Gordon
I am a super-spiritual, fun-loving artist, writer, & peer-counselor residing in the Pacific Northwest. I am also an Institute of Children's Literature alumna who enjoys writing about the triumph of the human spirit.
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Comments (20)
Wow! This was full of twist and turns and ended on a great note. Also, I loved the added scene where great grandma brooks, despite not being able to read, could read the Bible. It shows the power of scripture and how ‘the word’ of God knows no boundaries or limits. God always finds a way. 🙏🏾🤩😊❤️
Congratulations on your Top Story!!🎉🎉🎉
Oh Tiffany, this is stellar! Really enjoyed this! :)
The spiritual threads and family wisdom add so much depth to this YA piece.
Back to say congratulations on your Top Story! 🎉💖🎊🎉💖🎊
Wonderful story. Both tragic and uplifting, Tiff. Keep up the great work.
I think I blinked about three times after reading that first paragraph. I was aghast! Oh my gosh, I got so thrilled when Neddie was mentioned, even though he wasn't present. Scrape definitely lived up to his name. I am so relieved Ski finally resumed reading the Word.
I love your story, a little bit of spiritual and humor. Keep on writing ! Your writing bring joy and hope to readers!
Years ago in Kingston Jamaica, I remember a similar incident with a neighbors teenage son who tried to rob a bank with friends - he was not fortunate enough to make it out alive. this reminds me of him. There are youths who become so lost and refuse to listen...his mother was a strong church goer. The young need our support. Great topic.
Young people are so confused these days...its really great when they have responsible adults who they can turn to. These characters are so true to life and real. Angels and second chances for real.
I loved the themes of second chances and choosing better influences. I'm also in agreeance on the book!
So much to take in here, what a great character and yes this is perfect for young adults. I like the underlying message which helps those who read this that it is ok to fall, it is how you get back up again that counts.
I agree with Cathy, you should consider a book
The sudden news about Scrape and all the layers of his past make for a compelling start. It is wonderful to see Ski recognizing that he made the right choice to stay put. His determination to start helping others again and focus on his healing, like getting counseling and reconnecting with Ahanu, is a great turning point. It feels like a very hopeful new beginning for him. You are a talented writer!
I'm so glad they're on the road to being friends again! Also, poor A.N.T! Tooth pain is no joke!
You write beautifully, Tiffany. Have you considered putting together a collection of short stories? ❤️
Exciting and once I started to read I thought instantly this girls got a magical talent. Brilliant Tiffany 🦋🦋🦋🦋
✍️ Ms. Tiffany: I love your character development for Ski & Scrape! I know some readers might think all the legal and medical trauma would never happen, but I worked in the Alcohol/Drug field for yearssss. I saw the collective corrosion that fed on constant law, mind, body & soul devastation. Traumatized people can do traumatizing things until they set out on paths of healing. Who knows, maybe your words can be a light for those who need it. I admire you! 💙
Oh no, I hope ANT would be okay soon. Poor thing 🥺 I'm so happy that Ski and Ahanu are friends again! Loved your story Tiffy!
Such a great young adult story, Tiffany, asking to become a movie!