150: Loser
For Wednesday, May 29, Day 150 of the Story-a-Day Challenge

It had been quite the night. Drinking, fighting--loud. I slept in a coma. Upon awakening, I smelled urine. Man, was I out! My eyes unstuck from the sleep, fluttering open halfway. What I saw jolted me upright, turning my head each way, panicky, desperate to dissolve the nightmare.
It was a gun--a large gun--pointed right at me, its generous caliber opening in perfect focus one foot away from my face. My only thought was that anyone who awoke with a gun pointed at his face was either dead or as good as dead already. Or maybe, even, had it coming.
Sure, everyone has enemies. New ones from last night?
The poisons of the previous evening instantly detoxified, I jumped left, then right. I retreated in hurried steps. The gun followed.
Who was this?
The barrel still sharply focused, I strained to see farther. The rest of the gun blurred until I discerned a hazy shape that had to be someone's hand. Beyond that, the vision was increasingly nebulous, ill-defined, and above all, my nemesis.
"Who are you!" I shouted. "What's this all about? Let's talk."
No answer. I darted away, down the hall, switching this way and that. Every time my face locked into a position, the gun was there. I stopped. Where had I seen this type of thing before? Why was this familiar? Why was everything beyond the barrel out of focus?
This was MurderStalker 2.0! My on-line game.
Played it every day. I myself have held that gun, stalking my victims, room by room, collecting my tools, finding keys, and killing my way up to higher levels. I had never actually gotten to the top level and won the game.
I laughed.
"I don't know who drugged me; I don't know who you are, but I'm not playing your game." I closed my eyes, determined to dissipate my delirium. "And...I'm never drinking again," I chortled.
No one laughed back.
I opened my eyes. It was still there, even closer. From the hazy grasping hand I saw a thumb come into focus that slowly clicked back the hammer--a really bad sound.
"You lose..." he said in real-time to me. "You have no lives left."
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AUTHOR'S NOTES:
For Wednesday, May 29, Day 150 (150!!!) of the Story-a-Day Challenge.
366 WORDS (without A/N)
Title photo is AI generated, but the real losers are not.
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There are currently three surviving Vocal writers still participating in the 2024 Story-a-Day Challenge:
• L.C. Schäfer, challenge originator
• Rachel Deeming
• Gerard DiLeo (some other guy)
Watch them at they continue their noble struggle against 216 empty pages yet to be filled.
About the Creator
Gerard DiLeo
Retired, not tired. Hippocampus, behave!
Make me rich! https://www.amazon.com/Gerard-DiLeo/e/B00JE6LL2W/
My substrack at https://substack.com/@drdileo
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Comments (6)
That was so scaryyyy! But what a way to go 🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣 Congratulations on making it to 150! 🎉💖🎊🎉💖🎊
Whoa! That really is a bad dream!
Congratulations on reaching Day 150 of your Story-a-Day Challenge! "150: Loser" is a gripping tale that brilliantly merges reality and gaming in a suspenseful narrative. The unexpected twist, revealing the protagonist’s predicament as part of a game, is both clever and engaging. Your ability to keep the reader guessing until the very end is commendable. Thank you for sharing this thrilling story, and best of luck as you continue your challenge. Keep up the fantastic work!
What was it Plato recounts Socrates saying before he drank the hemlock? Something to the effect of not knowing who would be going on to the better place? Well-wrought, as usual!
Whoohoo! What a great story to get to 150 with! Well done, Gerard!
Wow! Congrats on 150!!! With that said, Great story that kept me guessing. I guessed wrong, lol.