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The wall that could talk.

the wall that teaches the values.

By BharathPublished 3 years ago 3 min read

Once upon a time, there was a wall that could talk. The wall belonged to a family of four. The family consisted of a father, mother, and two children.

One day, the father came home from work and was exhausted. He plopped down on the couch and let out a big sigh. The wall, sensing his fatigue, spoke up. “Hey dad, why don’t you take a break? You’ve been working so hard lately.” The dad was shocked that the wall was talking to him, but he was also relieved. He smiled and thanked the wall for its kind words. The next day, the mother came home from a long day of shopping. She was carrying lots of bags, and the wall noticed.

“Hey mom, why don’t you take a break? You’ve been shopping so hard lately.

” The mother was also surprised to hear the wall talking to her, but she appreciated the concern. She thanked the wall and went to rest. The next day, the two children were fighting over a toy. The wall watched as the argument escalated and finally spoke up. “Hey kids, why don’t you take a break? You’ve been fighting so hard lately.” The children were amazed that the wall was talking to them. They thanked the wall and stopped fighting. From that day forward, the wall became a part of the family. Every day it would provide words of encouragement and wisdom.

Whenever there is a problem in that family the wall comes to the play and advices not to fight and live together. Whenever there is any climate changes or any physical stress the wall overcomes it with the happiness. The wall wants the same attitude to be followed among the family members.

One day when there is a heavy hurricane the wall was so damaged. The family after seeing that felt like they missed a family member, so after that they started to build the damaged wall by constructing it with its own bricks and completed the wall after two months.

And after that also the wall didn’t talk to them so they felt really heart broken and they started to do their individual work . After that when there is a fight between the family members they are move to each corners and the unity between them was broken . Several days, went bonding between the family members were keep on increasing and they started to separate from the family events. The fight between the two children started to become a big issue and the brothers started to lose the love and affection on eachother. The father and mother started to fight frequently and they didn’t care about their children studies and their day to day activities. And totally the family was broken into pieces.

And one day, when it rains at the midnight suddenly a lightning strikes on the newly constructed wall. After sometimes the family members heard a crying voice in their bedrooms. They all came out of their rooms and started to see eachother but no one was crying and they followed the voice .

At last the crying voice came from the wall the family members were shocked that the wall was again started to talk. But the wall couldn’t able to see happiness on their faces . The mother asked the wall “ OMG! How are you wall?”.The wall replied that “Leave about me , say me why you all were fighting eachother?”. They all started to see eachother . The wall said ,I was not alive for two months.In these days you all lost your identity and forgot who

you are and fighting with your own family members. You all forgot the past of your life about your happy family events and your happy days . And now you guys started to hate yourself.

After the wall saying these things the family started to realise the current situation of the family and started to realise their mistakes and then they promised the wall that hereafter they wont fight between the family members for any unnecessary reasons and live the life happily without any inconveince among the family members.

And after the family members realises their mistakes the voice of the wall disappeared suddenly from their house to another house to resolve the mistakes done by them and to make them to realise their mistakes and lead their life happily.

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  • PK Colleran3 years ago

    If only this wall could go to many places! Thanks for this creative approach to the challenge.

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