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The Shadows That Whisper

A story of little girl

By Snigdha Ahmed Published 9 months ago 4 min read
The Shadows That Whisper
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The Shadows That Whisper A young girl by the name of Lily lived in a peaceful village surrounded by thick woods. She had wide, curious eyes and long brown hair that she liked to braid with wildflowers when she was seven years old. The village was peaceful, and the people were kind, but there was always one place the children were told to avoid: the old, abandoned house at the edge of the woods.

The house had stood there for as long as anyone could remember. Its windows were shattered, its roof caved in, and the walls were covered in vines that seemed to creep up from the ground like fingers trying to escape the earth. The elders of the village talked about the strange things that had happened there, the family that used to live there, and the little girl who had disappeared without a trace. But Lily didn't worry. She was a curious child, always exploring, always wandering where she wasn’t supposed to. One autumn afternoon, when the sun hung low in the sky and the woods were bathed in a golden light, Lily decided to go into the woods by herself. She had heard the older children talk about the haunted house, and the stories intrigued her. What if they were just stories? What if the house was nothing more than a relic of the past, long forgotten by time?

She went deeper into the woods with both excitement and trepidation. The trees started to get taller, and their branches started to twist into strange shapes as the air became cooler. The only sound she heard was the crunch of fallen leaves under her feet as she continued to walk. She finally caught sight of the old house. Even darker now that the sun was setting behind the trees, it loomed in front of her. It appeared to be waiting for her, as its outline seemed to cover the entire planet like a shadow. Lily hesitated for only a moment before pushing open the creaky gate and stepping onto the property.

Inside, the house smelled of dust and decay, but there was something else—a faint, sweet scent that made Lily’s nose twitch. It was almost like perfume, but old, as if it had been lingering in the air for years. She followed the scent as it seemed to guide her through the house, leading her to the staircase. Her every step seemed to echo through the empty hallways as the stairs creaked beneath her feet. When she reached the top, she found herself in a long hallway. The wallpaper on the walls was worn and yellowed from age. There was a door at the end of the hallway, slightly ajar, as if someone had left quickly. When Lily pushed it open, she was startled by what she saw. The room was small, with a dusty old crib sitting in the center. Pictures of a family—the parents, a young boy, and a girl—hung on the walls. With her mischievous smile and brown hair, the girl resembled her in every way. The thought sent a chill down Lily's spine. Then, she heard it—the faintest whisper. It was soft, like a breath on the wind, but it carried with it a sense of urgency. "Come closer," it said. The voice was so faint, Lily almost thought she had imagined it.

But when she turned to leave, the door slammed shut behind her, and the room grew cold. "Come closer, Lily," the whisper said once more, this time with more volume. Come and play with me."

Lily's pulse quickened. She spun around, searching for the source of the voice. The pictures on the wall seemed to move, their eyes following her every move. The crib rocked slowly back and forth, as though something unseen was inside.

Without thinking, she reached out for the door handle, but before she could touch it, a shadow appeared in the corner of the room. It appeared to stretch and twist, growing taller and more distinct with each passing second, despite being dark and shapeless. The whisper grew into a hiss, and the shadow lunged toward her.

"Play with me forever," it said in a voice that was no longer soft, but sharp and hungry.

Lily screamed, but no sound came out. She tried to run, but her legs felt like lead. The shadow was closing in on her, its presence suffocating the air around her. A ray of light broke through the darkness as the door flew open just as it was about to engulf her. Lily stumbled back into the hallway, gasping for air, her heart pounding in her chest. The shadow receded, its whispers fading into the air like a memory.

She ran from the house, not stopping until she was safely back in the village, her breath ragged and her body trembling. The house's broken windows appeared to be eyes that never closed when she looked back. That night, Lily lay in bed, the images of the house and the whispering shadows haunting her. But as she drifted off to sleep, she heard something—soft and faint—coming from the corner of her room.

“Lily… come play with me…”

And though she was no longer in the house, she knew the shadow was still there, waiting.

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Snigdha Ahmed

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