
The Breaking Point
Thompson’s collapse was a wake up call that echoed through the small apartment like a siren of despair. When his mother arrived at the hospital, she found her son pale and frail, his eyes sunken into his face, a shadow of the boy he once was. She had known he was struggling, but seeing him there, lying so helplessly, drove the reality of their situation deep into her heart. The sight of her son in such a weakened state broke something inside her, a mother’s instinct to protect, and to shield her child from the harshness of the world.
After that day, Thompson’s mother made a decision. She would take on the landlord’s chores herself. She would shoulder the burden that had been placed on her son, no matter the cost to herself. It wasn’t just the work she was taking over; it was the responsibility of ensuring that her family had a roof over their heads, that her children wouldn’t have to suffer the indignities she had long fought to shield them from.
The landlord, upon hearing this, was less than pleased. He had grown used to the quiet, diligent presence of Thompson, who had always done his work without complaint. But Thompson’s mother was adamant. “My son cannot continue this work,” she told the landlord, her voice steady despite the tremor she felt inside. “I will do whatever needs to be done.”
And so, the arrangement was made. Thompson returned to school, his recovery slow but steady, while his mother took up his place at the landlord’s house. She worked tirelessly, cleaning and scrubbing with the same relentless energy her son had shown. But the landlord noticed something different. Unlike Thompson, who had always kept his head down, focused solely on the tasks at hand, Thompson’s mother had a quiet dignity about her, a sense of pride that refused to be eroded by the menial labor she was forced to do.
It didn’t take long for the landlord to notice her in other ways, too. She was a woman of simple beauty, with a face etched by years of hardship, yet still retaining a softness that spoke of inner strength. The landlord, a man whose morals had long been corroded by power and greed, began to look at her with a new kind of interest, an interest that made Thompson’s mother uneasy.
At first, the landlord’s advances were subtle, a lingering glance, a comment that seemed out of place. But as time passed, his intentions became clearer. He would find excuses to be alone with her, cornering her in the kitchen or the back garden, his eyes roaming over her in a way that made her skin crawl. She tried to ignore it, to focus on the work, but the unease grew with every passing day.
One afternoon, as she was finishing up the laundry, the landlord approached her. His expression was different this time, more insistent, more predatory. He blocked her path, his bulky frame towering over her as he spoke in a low, oily voice.
“You know, you don’t have to work so hard,” he said, his breath warm and unpleasant against her cheek. “There are…other ways you could repay your debt.”
Thompson’s mother stiffened, her hands clenching the wet clothes she held. “I don’t understand,” she replied, though she knew exactly what he meant. The landlord smiled, a cruel twist of his lips. “Oh, I think you do. A woman like yo, you deserve to be taken care of. And I can do that for you. All you have to do is be a little…friendly.”
The words hit her like a physical blow. She felt the bile rise in her throat, the sheer audacity of his proposition making her sick to her stomach. But she didn’t show it. She couldn’t afford to. Instead, she took a deep breath, steadying herself. “No,” she said firmly, her voice unwavering. “I am not that kind of woman. I am here to work, and nothing more.”
The landlord’s expression darkened, his eyes narrowing. “You think you’re too good for me, is that it?” he hissed, his voice turning cold. “You should remember your place, woman. You’re nothing more than a servant, a beggar, really. And beggars can’t be choosers.”
Thompson’s mother felt a surge of anger, but she knew better than to let it show. She forced herself to remain calm, to keep her voice even. “I know my place,” she said quietly. “But I will not compromise my dignity. If that means you throw us out, then so be it.” For a long moment, the landlord said nothing, his face twisted in an ugly scowl. But then he stepped aside, allowing her to pass. “You’ll regret this,” he muttered darkly as she hurried away.
When she returned home that evening, her heart was heavy with the weight of what had happened. She knew she couldn’t keep this from her family, as much as she wanted to protect them from the ugliness of it all. So, after dinner, when the younger children were in bed, she sat down with Thompson and his siblings, her voice trembling as she recounted the landlord’s vile proposition.
Thompson listened in stunned silence, his hands balling into fists as his mother spoke. He had always known their situation was dire, but this, this was beyond anything he could have imagined. The rage that filled him was white hot, searing through him with a fury he had never felt before. The thought of that man, that vile, disgusting man, trying to take advantage of his mother, it was more than he could bear.
His younger brother and sister cried openly, their tears mingling with their mother’s. The small, crowded room was filled with the sounds of their grief, their despair at the cruelty of the world they lived in. But Thompson’s anger was silent, a smoldering fire that burned in the depths of his soul. He clenched his teeth, his mind racing with thoughts of vengeance, of making the landlord pay for what he had tried to do.
For days, the anger consumed him. He could barely focus on his studies, his mind constantly returning to the landlord, to the way he had looked at his mother. The hatred festered, growing more potent with each passing day. And then, the thought came to him—poison. It would be so easy, so simple. The landlord trusted him, had never once suspected him of anything but obedience. He could slip something into the man’s food or drink, something that would put an end to his miserable existence.
Thompson wrestled with the idea, the temptation gnawing at him like a persistent itch. He knew it was wrong, knew it went against everything he had been taught. But the thought of that man touching his mother, of him trying again to break her spirit, it was unbearable.
One night, unable to sleep, Thompson sat alone in the darkness of their small apartment, a vial of rat poison clutched in his hand. He stared at it, the liquid inside glowing faintly in the dim light. His heart pounded in his chest, his thoughts swirling in a chaotic storm of anger, fear, and desperation. He could end it all, right here, right now. He could protect his family, ensure that they would never have to fear the landlord again.
But as he sat there, the image of his mother’s face floated into his mind, her tired eyes, her gentle smile, the way she had always cared for him, even when she had nothing to give. He thought of his siblings, their tear streaked faces, their innocent trust in him to do the right thing. And suddenly, the vial felt like a weight in his hand, a burden too heavy to bear. He knew he couldn’t go through with it. He wasn’t a murderer. No matter how much he hated the landlord, he couldn’t bring himself to cross that line. He couldn’t stain his hands with blood, no matter how justified it might seem.
With a shuddering breath, Thompson rose to his feet and walked to the window. The night was still and quiet, the city around them asleep. He opened the vial and poured its contents onto the ground below, watching as the liquid soaked into the earth. The act felt like a release, a letting go of the anger that had consumed him for so long.
But the fury didn’t dissipate entirely. It simmered beneath the surface, a reminder of the injustice they faced, of the man who still held power over their lives. Thompson knew that he couldn’t change their situation overnight, but he also knew that he couldn’t give in to the darkness. He had to find another way, one that didn’t involve violence, one that would allow him to hold onto his humanity.
The next morning, Thompson returned to the landlord’s house. His mother had protested, worried for his health, but he insisted. He couldn’t let her go back there, not after what had happened. He took up his duties once more, his resolve hardened by the trials he had faced. He would finish school, no matter what it took, and he would do it with honor.
Over the following months, Thompson poured himself into his studies with renewed determination. The work at the landlord’s house was as grueling as ever, but he endured it, using the anger that still simmered within him as fuel. He had a goal now, a purpose that drove him forward. He would graduate with the highest honors, make something of himself, and prove that he was more than just a poor boy from a broken family.
The day of his graduation was a day of mixed emotions. Thompson stood among his classmates, his heart swelling with pride as his name was called, and he walked across the stage to receive his certificate. He had done it despite everything!
Check out the next published post for Chapter Three.
About the Creator
Victor Obanor Osagie
As a Nigerian UK-based author,my pen transports readers into vibrant worlds rich with culture,tradition, & human depth.With an eye for detail & a heart attuned to Nigeria's pulse,I craft stories that echo life’s essence & its complex beauty




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