Families logo

The Bird That Waited 17 Years

Written in a lyrical, symbolic style suitable for Vocal Media’s nature and personal essay genres.

By Masih UllahPublished 7 months ago 3 min read

Every morning she sang the same song — until the one who left finally returned.

The first time the bird sang, Mara was seventeen. She had just watched her brother board a train bound for a far-off city. He had dreams she couldn’t hold, and she had roots he couldn’t wear.

That spring morning, as the tracks groaned under the weight of departure, Mara heard it — a soft, spiraling trill from the tree near the edge of their property. A clear, haunting melody, both distant and close. It pierced her stillness. A bird, glossy black with eyes like embers, perched high on the sycamore and sang.

She hadn’t heard a bird sing quite like that before.

Not the warbles of spring robins or the chatter of sparrows — this was something slower, sadder. Intentional.

She named it “Sable.”

Mara listened each morning as the song repeated. Not always the same notes, but the same yearning. The same beginning, the same aching end.

The same echo of goodbye.

Years passed, slow at first, then suddenly fast. The tree grew taller, the song more familiar.

Seasons changed. Mara stayed.

She became the keeper of the land, the one who trimmed the garden her mother once planted, who kept the porch painted even when no one came to visit.

She wrote letters — long ones at first. Then shorter. Then none at all. Her brother never replied, not once.

But every morning, without fail, Sable returned to that same branch, and sang.

The town around Mara began to shrink.

Neighbors moved, stores closed. What had once been vibrant with voices and laughter softened into silence. Still, Mara remained.

She had her work, and she had Sable.

The bird came with the sun, left with the dusk. It never grew old. It never brought friends. It only sang — for seventeen years.

Sometimes she thought she imagined it, that the bird was some figment of her longing.

But then the mailman asked,

"That blackbird still singing up near your roof?"

Or the grocer would say,

"Funny how it always lands in that same spot. Like it's waiting for something."

They all noticed, but no one questioned.

On the seventeenth spring, something shifted.

It was subtle — a hesitation in the opening note, a tremble in the middle.

Mara stood at the edge of her porch, coffee cooling in her hand, listening harder than ever.

Then came the knock.

She almost didn’t hear it over the song.

The door creaked open to reveal a man — older, beard unkempt, eyes shadowed by distance. He carried no bag. Just a folded letter in his pocket and a photograph in his hand.

Mara’s heart didn’t race. It didn’t even flinch.

It simply opened, slowly, like a door that had been stuck for far too long.

Her brother stepped in, unsure of whether the welcome still lived there.

And then — just behind him — came the final note.

Sable stopped singing.

The bird tilted its head, then lifted into the sky, higher than Mara had ever seen it fly.

It circled once, twice — and was gone.

They sat at the kitchen table that evening, not talking much.

He said he'd meant to come back sooner. That life had a way of pulling people in strange directions. That he thought of her every year. That the photo was all he had left of home.

She nodded. Stirred her tea. Looked out the window at the empty branch.

"Funny thing about that bird," she said, almost to herself.

He looked up. "What bird?"

She blinked, then smiled.

"Never mind."

The next morning, the air was quiet.

Mara woke early, poured two cups of coffee instead of one, and waited on the porch.

The sycamore rustled in the wind, but no song came.

And yet — the silence didn’t ache.

It felt… complete.

She watched the sun rise. Her brother stepped out beside her, unsure if he belonged there, but grateful nonetheless.

In the distance, other birds began to sing — cheerful, scattered tunes. No one note repeated. No melody lingered.

And Mara thought:

Maybe the bird wasn’t singing for her.

Maybe it was singing for him — calling him back, one note at a time.

Seventeen years of morning songs. Seventeen years of a sister who stayed, and a bird that waited.

Until, finally, the one who left returned.

feature

About the Creator

Masih Ullah

I’m Masih Ullah—a bold voice in storytelling. I write to inspire, challenge, and spark thought. No filters, no fluff—just real stories with purpose. Follow me for powerful words that provoke emotion and leave a lasting impact.

Reader insights

Be the first to share your insights about this piece.

How does it work?

Add your insights

Comments

There are no comments for this story

Be the first to respond and start the conversation.

Sign in to comment

    Find us on social media

    Miscellaneous links

    • Explore
    • Contact
    • Privacy Policy
    • Terms of Use
    • Support

    © 2026 Creatd, Inc. All Rights Reserved.